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Oooh I want to see more of this! I am liking it quite a bit. Also, not trying to be mean or anything, but your grammar/spelling is a bit off; like 'their' and 'there' were mixed up, and it would be 'impending' not 'appending' I'm really sorry, I just have this thing about it...but trust me I've seen a LOT worse :) I could read this no problem; some fics are so horrible in their grammar and sentence structure, I literally cannot read them. I read just a little, and I have to back out and find another cause the author didn't even try. Sorry I rambled, I really do like how this story is going, and if I didn't offend you, I'd really like to see where your muse or plot bunnies take you in continuing this story. Thank you! :)

Please finish this story.

I really like how this story has started and i hope that you continue on with it.

Please update soon

I find this story interesting. I wish you luck with writing more of it! It really is an interesting story and I can't wait to read more!

oh this sounds interesting. update soon plz.

I knew it! I knew Sesshomaru would do and say things to break poor InuYasha! Poor little puppy! Sesshomaru needs to be taught a lesson! Good job, I'm eargerly awaiting to next chapter!

B reading U!

Wow this story has a lot of potential and I really hope you continue with it. I personally love mpreg so I'm thrilled with that. Sessh freaking out and blaming Inuyasha now that is so very Sesshomaru. I am really looking forward to where you take this and how you use your imagination. As always I want to kill stupid Sesshomaru yet again the only thing out of place was Inuyasha crying in the anime at least it takes alot for him to cry which does make sense since he's had such a hard lonely life and it would be a waste of tears to cry besides as he said in the anime guys don't cry although we all know that's bull and that it's just a front I mean Inuyasha is like a very sensitive young half demon that's why he puts up the tough exterior. God I do love that show and stories like this so thank you so much for sharing and I really hope you continue with this interesting story,

really cool story line soooo can't wait for more.

It was so mean of Sesshoumaru to strangle poor Inuyasha after he mated with him. I feel for my favorite little hanyou. He is so fragile.