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now we are getting somewhere

I like how you gave background for Kikyo, making it so she wasn't just evil, but slowly corrupted through power.

Hey! I'm still reading. I think I missed reviewing your last update. Shoot!
Maybe some people are saying Sesshemoru is different, however in the context of this story, I am enjoying him completely and feel you did set up up well with his background. The interplay as he sort of affectionately stalks his Beta is lovely to read and enjoy and you can feel the slow build up. He's being a rather willful character for you, isn't he?

Is there going to be any whiplash emotionally from Inuyasha? Like he lets things go, what happens the next time he meets a threat? Realizes there's still danger in his world. It seems like he really trusts his Alpha, so maybe not. He's so strong and so fragile. I'm rooting for his new found family but especially Sesshemoru as they continue to piece up back into his full nature. It's beautiful to watch the love and protection they're all showing.

Thank you for the new chapter. Please keep writing!

Saw it and loved it. Again you have hit how Sesshy would react in this type of situation and how poor sweet little Inuyasha would react. It's interesting to have the Shikon no tama itself as the bad poison very new kind of take. I loved how Sesshy wanted you to write it and I to can't wait to see Sessh bestow pleasure and love on our little Hanyou. Boy I wish I had your way with words totally amazing. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Lovely chapter of Survive. I rather like that you have Sessy waiting and tempting our little Inuyasha. It makes it very very yummy. I'm also very very interested in just where the Kikyou (boo hisss) storyline is going.

Thanks for writing!

This is absolutly beautiful and enthrawling. Sesshomaru's tenderness is heartwarming. It brings tears to my eyes. Very, very well done.

This is so SWEET - Love Lord Stripey being jealous of his love's own GRANDFATHER for ghu's sake, wanting his time to himself, but hey, they haven't really had that much time together. And leaving Miroku in the hands of a certain eagar-for-knowledge healer, cracked me up, TACTICS!!! Then the woods, oh my THE TREES, and that holy one in particular. It's interesting how different their relationship is, Sess and Inu, because Inu's horrible life is not in any way Sess's fault. He is not bearing the guilt that he would in most timelines and he can react with a calm, whole-hearted love and passion that are not tainted by what he SHOULD have done earlier. And I love the way he accepts all of the aspects, this is a particularly split persona Inu, more than usual, and I'm pleased that they seem to accept Sess as Alpha, and much more. And oh oh!!!! Something nasty stirs...

I enjoy your stories and even though I love a good sex scene, I love the plot of a story even more. The wonder Inuyasha has at being in the forest was amazing. I really enjoyed that scene. I also like how possessive Sesshomaru is of Inuyasha. I liked this chapter a lot and I cannot wait to read more! I apologize if I haven't reviewed recently, but a lot of things came up at one time. Anyway, good luck with the next chapter!

Absolutely lovely, heartbreaking. I am so glad Inuyasha can cry again. I love the description of Inuyashas four elements looking at the forest for the first time.

I'm not so sure about Miroku, I can understand him wanting to have his grandson to himself, but it would be so easy for him to become selfish and accidently hurt Inuyasha, especially as Inuyasha is so fragile it could only take the smallest mistep. I can't see inu giving up Sesshomaru but having to turn away from Miroku? It could be very easy to get into a lose/lose situation.

Ps thanks for updating serpants and dog demons, two story updates in one day, how wonderful. Please update soon. (any story) :-)

Hehehehe...I just love how jealous Sesshou was of anyone getting Yasha attention...and HE DOES NOT WANT TO SHARE *that made me LOL and grinned like an idiot* ...can't wait for the next chapter and that last part have me at the edge of my seat, bouncing with excitement. best wishes and regards. ^__^