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i get it they keep his mom alive. nice looking forward to what happens. the sex was nice and all but it what missing something more.

Good to see this story back, and very nice to see Inu and Sesshomaru's realtionship progressing into intimacy. I loved Inuyasha's reaction to finally having his alpha inside him, so sweet and very sexy. Great work as always, I can't wait to read more!

I'm not sure I have reviewed this before or not, but I LOVE this story!!! This latest chapter just made me love it even more :)

I couldn't sleep last night, so I figured I'd try my luck with a story, and now its nearly 8 in the morning! So thank you for an amazing story thus far (and a far more entertaining sleepless night)! Please consider updating soon because this is one of the better stories I've read recently, and I really like how you've handled in the characters in a non-canon story! I also love how you make Inuyasha, Inu, Yasha, and Pup work, its not something I've seen before which is refreshing and its terribly well done (once I figured out what was happening, took me awhile to catch on but as I said... I was sleep deprived) Also I seriously want to read what you had in mind for the next new moon... and everything in between =3

What a wonderfully angst and love filled chapter ^.^ Oh how it left me wanting more!!!

It's 8PM on 5 July, and I'm sitting in my living room, CRYING! Inu, his pain and bravery, the way he shoulders any possible BLAME, just hurts, so hurt. Sess is right, that damn temple got EVERYTHING wrong... And oh, I LOVE Sess in this, he's using a wonderful combo of tough/tender here, so very gentle touching the scared, scarred, hurt human Inu, and so strong talking to him. Inu can not be a Taint to Inuyasha, since every aspect belongs to Sess, and Sess is perfect... which would be hilarious except that in this version, Sess IS fairly perfect (DON'T tell him...). And I love the short tour of the human places in his city, and LOVE Sess's happy pat on his own back. Very nice work indeed!

And a quick healing for YOU, missed you and hope you get way better soon!

I am sorry to hear that you're having rl issues. Hope everything is on the mend.

I enjoy most everything that you write, and always check on your stories when I come to the site. I'm especially intrigued by this one, though, because of the multiple personality aspects of Inuyasha and watching Sesshoumaru figuring them out and trying to help. I love angst (literary angst, anyways) but I'm a sucker for the happily ever after.

This chapter was pretty brutal...not sure I realized quite how hard the human aspect was on himself. His total sacrifice for the rest of them (and utter lack of hope for himself) had me teary-eyed. So glad that Sess caught on pretty quick & showed him the humans...and that it wasn't neatly resolved that evening...and no sex. Thank goodness. They have a long road to recovery (hopefully) before there's too much of that...this fic is definitely skirting my comfort zones as far as mental health & healthy relationships go...I have faith in you, though, so I'm sticking with you. It's been awesome so far, if a little hard to read occasionally, because of Inuyasha's past...and the awful dungeon scenes. T_T The supporting characters are great, though, and I totally love that Kagome & Kikyo are utter bastards from the temple because, really, that's spot-on IC (at least to me).

Keep up the great work. I'll be waiting for updates...and I'll try to be a better commenter, too. :D

I loved this one except I was bawling by the end of the chapter. It was so sweet and emotional and loving. I love how your making sure that Sesshomaru treats each aspect of Inuyasha the same and yet differently according to that aspects needs and desires and you are doing a beautiful job at it. All of his aspects have been through so much pain and well horror and Sesshomaru is teaching each one that they are needed and loved and wanted by him no matter what. I can't wait till Sesshomaru teaches and claims him on the next moonless night I'm looking forward to that. I am thrilled that he didn't do that at this time he just wanted to help Inu to relax and start to show him some love and compassion I also loved how you put in that Miroku and Jinenji joined them that would also help to make Inu feel better I can just imagine the three of them trying to make Inu feel more at ease and comfortable at least now hopefully he'll be in much better health mentally and physically from now on.
Off the story I am relieved to hear that your feeling better and I sincerely hope you continue to feel better.

That was a really cute chapter. Poor Inu, I'm glad Sesshomaru doesn't hate humans in this story. That way, he can accept all of Inuyasha. I look forward to more!

I like how you can with such subtility describe the action of conforting a hurt Inuyasha !
Welcome to good health again and thank you for your stories !!!

A french reader,
Merely Truth