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New chapter! ^_^ And such and exciting one. Inuyasha has grown so much, and so naturally. The last scene gave me the shivers. Something is going to happen, and somehow, it seems like Sesshemoru's Beta has more to learn. One of my favorite parts of your story is the multiple facets in Inuyasha. Not only are they interesting, but they drive the story. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Wrote a long admiring note Fri. and the darn system ate it... Glad you're back writing, even when tired and put out by Real Life, your work has GOT to be a consolation. It sure is for me - this last chapter made my week!! Not sure what I like best: that high-ranked demons have no problem consulting a great, elderly priestess of the Light, respecting her for her age, wisdome and power... That everyone in the castle is delighted to see Inu smile, seeing his charm, his TOTAL self, the self that their Lord loves so much, and that they appreciate their Lord loving more than a pretty face... that they are willing to use Inu for a trap because the need is SO important, otherwise they wouldn't. And that sex scene, waiting for the Hanyou to tell his Alpha that the great Lord belongs to HIM, Inuyasha!!!! I was holding my breath for it, think Sess was too. In this AU I'm particulary taken with your Sess, he's not the neurotic, messed-in-the-head ice prince of the series or most stories, he's comfortable with himself, patient, BALANCED. And I want to meet his sister!!!! Anyway, thanks for the gorgeous long chapter, hope the writing block is unglued, and Happiest of Holidays!

awww, hope things aren't too hard on you.
you know, i always had a lot of succes using a flamethrower to convince any shit that comes at me, that it's a very good idea to leave me alone ^_^ or you can ask sesshy to use his poisonclaw. i garantee that all your problems will dissapear right before your eyes (along with the floor and any innocent bystanders, but hey, who cares?)
anyway, i really like your story.
right now i don't have a lot of idea's but i'll tell you as soon as inspiration hits.
good luck with everything, and i wish you a merry christmas and a happy new year!

Good luck in your efforts to survive bad stuff ! and Merry Christmans nonetheless...
Thank you for your wonderful stories.
French reader,
Joyeux Noël !

Merely Truth

Wonderful to see another chapter. I was wondering where you were going with the last part between Sesshemoru and Inuyasha, but you were perfect. It came out, exactly right. Inuyasha needed to learn that, and Sesshemoru needed him to learn that.

Hi there!

I would just like you to know that this is one of the greatest Inuyasha fics I've ever read. The amount of detail and effort that has been put into this story is amazing and clearly evident while reading. The story is new and interesting and if this was a book I would be inclined to say that I couldn't put it down. I can't wait to read more of this well thought out plot.

Sincerely,
Elfling

Omg love your story! I really hope you finish

I finally got a chance to read this and I loved it of course. The love making was wonderful and Sesshomaru was so sweet and giving which is the way it should be especially since it was Inuyasha's first time. I also adored his Auntie talk about so cool she sounded so totally cool. I also loved how Inuyasha got her right off the bat that he can look inside a person and not look at just the outside. I also loved how she could show Inuyasha how much she loved him by respecting him and his feelings a totally cool relationship. And I also loved the bit about the writing and how she will help him by correcting his writing and sending it back so he can see what he did wrong and correct it totally sweet. It amazes me how great you can write. Don't know if you realize it or not but on Inuyasha's fan guild you have been nominated again for best yaoi and I am defidently gonna vote for you. I couldn't nominate anybody mainly cause I was to busy to get on the computer as far as fanfiction was concerned so sad but I'm back at least as long as my life stays less busy. I also can't wait to find out what happens next and find out how they plan to handle the latest crisis in their lives. Gotta go stay happy and awesome.

I loved the love making scene in this last chapter. It was so romantic and my only complaint is wish it was longer. I also wish you would have put in the wake up scene with the two Inu's perhaps talking a little about what had occured between them. Still, it was a great chapter and I still think it is hilarious that Miroku is Inuyasha's Grandfather. The guy is such a pervert letch, but I love him like that.
Anyway, it was a great chapter and I look forward to the next chapter.

yay i was jonesing for another chapter so thanks for that. No guesses as of yet i'll let the story unfold as you will it.