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by ajj77sunhawk

person starlight
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this new chapter!! I love the way you mentioned what Inuyasha had been up to for the last nine days without dragging it on. I'm also very satisfied with the twist, of course I couldn't help but hope for Sesshoumaru, but the new twist was definitely acceptable! I liked the suprise! And you didn't have to put the warning in, it would have been more suspenseful without it (but I was so eager to read this chapter I totally skipped over the warning at first anyway!). Great job and I can't wait for when Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha finally encounter each other once again (though I do realize it probably won't be next chapter...)!! Keep up the wonderful work!
person river girl
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for filling in the gap! I didn't doubt you.

I LOVED this new chapter. The healer has a beautiful soul. And your depiction of death and how death interacts with the healer, oddly calming and respectful. I don't know if its all the time I've spent in Asia and the concept of the wheel of life or what, but it drew me in.

I'm sitting here just being happy with this new developement, almost like an emotional crash after the last chapter. I want the next chapter, and I have all sorts of curious questions about how Inuyasha will wake up and the consequences for certain unsavory characters. At the moment, I feel like your healer must feel, relief, even knowing the storms not over.

One odd questions, after all this time, will Inuyasha be able to handle kindness?
person quittie
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've read strength! Actually I was reading it before survive... and I always check if you already updated! ahahha! and silly me, It was then that I realize that both of the story was authored by you! I'm such a fan! More power!
person Aalto
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how fast you updated. Also you write well. I can hardly wait to 'see' Seshys reaction to what Manten did! Pleasepleaseplease update quikly!
person delishka
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
is it sad that I'm refreshing your author page ever half hour on the chance that you've updated? I'm really enjoying your work.
person jdbbrz27
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing and so dramatic I was breathless by the end of it. I just got a chance to read the last 5 chapters or so I've been to busy lately and they were amazing. Loved the tribute gifts great idea and Sessh's reaction when he finally saw Inuyasha for the first time priceless. I hate Manten and hopes he suffers a bit before death. I loved Jinenji what a sweetheart and only a real healer with one who heals with their mind and soul and not just their knowledge would be able to be so connected with death as to follow it's leads. I love how you described death and it's reluctance to take Inuyasha's soul. I can't blame the little raccoon nurse she isn't all that sharp obviously and most would be reluctant to go against someone who is higher up in the heirechy so I'm thrilled Jinenji kind of sort of ordered it from her kind of. I will be waiting for the next update and for Sessh's return I really am getting into this story and I didn't think I would.
person dino1
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your stories. I also like that you had a chapter dedicated to a minor character in the series. I'm glad that and i like the fact he can see death. I can see that in a healer. I can't wait till next chapter.
schedule November 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Jinenji's role is great. I certainly want to see Manten get what he deserves. I'm also doing a nano, but I'm not as far along as you are. Great progress.
person starlight
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your new story! It's sooo good! You always leave me so on edge! I can't wait for your next update! I also hate how much I love how you torture poor little Inuyasha! I love the plot line and the development of this story! SOOOO good! Your writing is awesome, don't stop! Excited to see what happens next!
person angelsword
schedule November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what sort of angst you were planning, this was enough to make me cry,I don't know if my heart could take more angst. Loving the story so far, please keep writing.