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Oh, that was cute and intriguing! What kind of magic was that? Inuyasha's mother or father must have been very special for him to be able to manifest his pup form. Very cute. ^_^

Sorry, five hours sleep in two days just isn't enough and I was sleeping. My schedule might be changing soon, especially since we had another fire and it has made me really sick.

I LIKE THIS VERY MUCH. Just like all of your Inu fics you never know what will happen next. I think demon Inuyasha should pop up next and maybe give some answers to Sesshoumaru. Pup was the first and could not really tell him anything except that he was still innocent to some degree.

OMG, i had such laughs at pups antics i nearly cried!! (and almost coughed my lungs out 'cause i've a cold X)
it was sooo cute and funny and cute and amusing and sessy's reactions just added even more cuteness.
pup's a little kitten nya~nya (yeah, i'm ill and crazy and you're cheering up my day X)
honestly, up until now i've read this story every day but this chapter was so endearing it got your story
into my story-top-ten (and believe me, that is quite a feat 'cause i've read a lot ^_^
so that's 1-0 for you XD
keep going, i need something to read tomorrow XDXDXD luuuuv you ^_^

Aw I want pup can I take care of all of them oh wait that's Sesshomaru's job isn't it darn it all. I adore all the aspects to Inuyasha and the whole concept is so original god this story is really awesome. It's awesome that Sesshomaru is the only one outside of Inuyasha who has seen pup and talked to him I can not wait to see where else this story goes because it just gets more and more interesting every day. I hope you win this nano thing because this story deserves recognition.

I'm completely confused as to just how Pup managed to physically manifest, but he is just so cute I could eat him for breakfast and I won't ask a lot of questions regarding the destruction and creation of matter within a living being.... I'm sure that Sess will have a lot of questions for Inuyasha when he does finally come out of his drug induced coma.

I liked the little back story on Jinenji and how he came to the court of Sess. It makes him a more rounded character. It also gives him a frame of reference to calm Inuyasha if he goes a little wonky on believing that Sess won't harm him.

Cute, cute and more cute. I love Pup, he definately needs many, many hugs. Could Sesshemoru eventually get to do that? Pretty please? Thank you.

I loved the under the bed part. And Sesshemoru just keeps getting better and better. Thanks for the tibit on the background search. Will Inuyasha ever meet the rest of the family?

Yay this is one of the best stories I've ever read! Please, continue as soon as possible! :D

I had been waiting for this thank you for being so quick and prompt. I thought it all made perfect sense how the four parts of Inuyasha finally were able to come together and be one something Inuyasha desperately needed and now has it was done beautifully. I also like the possessiveness that Jeninji felt towards Inuyasha especially with their mutual connection of both being hanyous wonderfully touching. I have to admit my favorite part was the jealous possessive and protectiveness of Sesshomaru though that was truly and lovingly done for the two have a closer connection than the hanyous being that they are both Siro Inu Dog Demons I can not wait to see what happens next it is really exciting. I really liked like when Sesshomaru got mad he his all the demons with his whip that's what they get for following stupid orders when circumstances have changed in a particular situation good thing not all soldiers and generals do that or there would be some different winners in certain wars of the past in this world. You are doing a fantastic job with this story keep it up.

The only question I had as I was reading this was that if the hanyou aspect and Pup had merged, how could they still be 4 'seperate' entities? Perhaps I just got a little confused. Other than that, I think this chapter is a home run. The scenes within Inuyasha's mind and sanctuary were beautiful and wonderfully written. You've followed through with each of their personalities through each of the chapters. Even Sesshomaru's character as you've written him up to this point has been true to itself. (I have trouble with authors who start off with a character having one persona and then switch it around to another willy-nilly)
I can't believe that Manten really believes that he was doing what he was told. I mean taunting someone with food with the idea to give it to them when they begged for it is something completely different from offering the food and it being refused. grrrr. I hope he gets more than a simple hand mushing. I can totally see Sess offering Inuyasha the decision as to his fate and Inuyasha letting him go, but I hope that isn't what happens.
Wonderful wonderful chapter. Thanks so for writing it!

i have to say that this is a diffrent point of view than ive read before but i deff like it. keep it up ur doing great.
and of course PLEASE UPDATE.