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soo cool :D i really like yasha but i loooove pup. anyway the story is amazing, keep going :D

whew that was well wow I love little yasha the demon so innocent and strong and so easily misled. Makes me wonder what will Sessh do now that he has to deal with the fully aware of the real world hanyou who has been through way to much pain in his very young life. Will Sessh be truly honorable or a comple letch and heal out to take advantage of the young Inuyasha oh let's be serious he didn't save Inuyasha just to scare him off right off by fucking the crap out of him but it should be interesting to see how Sesshomaru deals with this.

I don't think that mongrel is a good word to use around Sesshoumaru. He will straighten that out though.

Wow, amazing! And here I was hoping to see him make the poor youngster blush and stutter XD lol. And while I admit to this being an evil cliffy where I am dieing to see what happens next with inuyashas offer... Im more hoping to see shess holding our little pup and cuddling him ^.^ But honestly Ill be happy with just about anything as soon as I see an update ;)

Another lovely chapter. I will agree that I am rather glad that you didn't leave us at that particular cliffy-to-be. We would have been most vexed.

Sess's eager desire to either interact with Pup again or to have Inuyasha awaken was pretty cute. He was like a little boy waiting for Christmas.

I like Yasha. While he doesn't exactly seem the youkai personality of most fanfiction, I still found him intriguing. Each of the aspects seems to have their own physical manifestation and I find that interesting. Inu has his dark hair and eyes and his fragile humanity, Inuyasha has his puppy ears and mature being, Pup has his size and youthful vigor, and Yasha has his elfin ears and tail. I love moko-moko-sama as a tail, so I like Yasha having a tail, too. We own Golden Retrievers, so I can completely visualize the raised waving flag of a tail. On a side note, Sess trying to get the youkai aspect to try to explain how he 'worked' in relation to the other aspects was a lot of fun.

Yahsa is young and full of romanticized ideals, and I found his interaction with Sess very, well, puppy like. He is a young teenager who doesn't quite understand what the world is really about not what to do about it. I thought, while reading, of just how glad I was that someone like Manten didn't really get ahold of this aspect before Sess had a chance to step in. They would have used everything in him up and then thrown it away like yesterday's garbage. His solemn oath, given with all the majesty that a young child-man can bring to the table, had me smiling.

I will admit that I was a little disappointed in Sess. That his first inclination was something sexual with the young youkai, was a little off-putting. While I know and cherish future acts these two will undoubtedly participate in, this came across a little to abrupt. I know that you indicated that Yasha's frank, open face and eagerness is what made Sess think to try it, but it still seems to be a little abrupt when just a few paragraphs before you had him discussing the fact that he was a youkai of honor. Just my two cents.

Inuyasha's awakening and shutting away of the other three aspects in response to Sess's sexual encouragement was sweet. His will protect these sides of himself no matter what. His "deadness" and almost fatalistic view of things made me a little sad, though. Even here, where he should be able to be safe, he thinks of himself as nothing more than a thing to be used and abused. I hope Sess realizes what is going on.

Thanks for writing for us!! I'm looking forward to seeing how this scene plays out!

Interesting, veeeery interesting... I can hardly wait to read more. Pup was so cute! I can hardly wait for Sesshy to meet Yasha, and how will Inuyasha explain pup to Sesshy...? Can hardly wait.

You write very well and I really like the characters. Hope you'll update soon, but I refuse to push or rush you, it'll only bring inferior results.

Well, what can I say…
You´ve made me love NaNo.
To have you writing us such wonderful stories (I’ve been reading you for some time already), and having new chapters basically every day.
That really makes me Loove NaNo.
I LOOOOOVVVeeeee the story, InuYasha is so C.U.T.E.
And I LOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEE you…
Please keep on writing and keep on NaNo.
Smacks.

This is my favorite chapter so far!! I love how the four Inuyasha's are connected now! I'm so glad Sesshoumaru is back! I love the reasoning you had as to why Sesshoumaru is taking Inuyasha with him instead of leaving him with the healer. It makes a lot of sense and I'm so excited for Inuyasha to be in Sesshoumaru's bedroom!! I love the flow of the story and felt that you really had Sesshoumaru and the charracters personalities spot on! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Ah....Sesshemoru has a flare for the dramatic, doesn't he? (claps happily) The details, details. I loved the details in this chapter. Read it twice before I reviewed to enjoy all of them. Like displacing the healer's cloak with his tail when Sesshemoru takes Inuyasha in his arms, the way he doesn't let anyone else see Inuyasha's human face, the careful observances of the healer's anger and the quick curiosity that still lingers even after everything he has seen and done as a ruler and demon lord.

I had no problems with the section in Inuyasha's mind. Seemed clear to me. I'm curious and excited for Inuyasha's interaction with the rest of the world, now that he has access to all of his personality and his memories. How will Pup handle Sesshemoru, I wonder. Will Sesshemoru every fully grasp the complexity of the creature he has decided to posses. I love his possessiveness. I just hope our darling healer comes out whole! I wonder if Inuyasha can even handle affection after all this time? Can he believe it? He has great concern and love for others, but will he understand it when it is reciprocated? I hope he keeps his gentleness and compassion. I have to believe he does. Even after all this time, he hasn't once had an angry thought. Even when he killed, he was compassionate through his own pain and suffering.

Thank you for making Manten bleed. I definately hope you aren't finished with him. And please, please, be nice to our darling healer. The horse hanyou is to nice for his own good and shows remarkable inability to defend himself, which only adds to his charm. With a less decerning master though, he might find himself quite abused.

Next chapter, pretty please! I hope your hands are hanging in there!

I love Pup. He is so dang cute. Sesshoumaru is being so patient and kind too. I really love this side of Sesshoumaru. I only hope he can undo the damage that was done to poor Inuyasha both psychologically and physically.
I also want to thank you for your review of my story. I, like every writer, looks forward to reviews since they are what makes all this work worthwhile.