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I have to admit that Inuyasha is amazing in this story. I am also glad that Sesshoumaru is courting Inuyasha. I can't wait to see how their relationship blossoms since the two of them are so perfect together.

Chapter 14

SQUEEEE!

I don't know why I love more in this chapter, the unsure, yet hoping Inuyasha or the quietly emotional Jinenji. I just want to hug them both to unconsciousness.

Inuyasha's quiet question made me smile a little. He wants to believe Sess so badly, but he just can't let go of that last few moments of distrust. I'm glad Jinenji was so forthcoming with him. And then when the horse hanyou glomped him. Well I giggled pretty good with that one too. I can just imagine Inuyasha all but begging Jinenji to stop crying and let him down!

I also enjoyed Inu's 'punishment' and 'reward. Fun fun stuff. I like that he didn't associate it with the 'kisses' of the priestesses at the Temple. That would have sucked and would have taken a lot of get over for the poor Hanyou.

I wonder if they will discover who Inuyasha's biological family was or if it will really matter in the end.

Thanks for writing this chapter for me/us! Squeee

I loved the section at the beginning on Inuyasha's sense of smell and how it had developed far above the norm for his kind because he was not allowed to use his eyes. I like that explination far better than some kind of "he's special" that you could have done. Excellent excellent job. It was looking at Sess's world through a different kind of eyes. I liked it very much.

I also liked the second where you were talking about the different kinds of scent marking. It is an interesting and unique idea. Creatures that use pheromones to attract mates have been known to be able to distinguish different kinds and types of scents from far far away, so I really like that you added this idea in.

I had wondered what would happen to Manten, and I thought that you would discuss it soon, but I didn't really expect it to be on Inu's first day out. I like it because it has allowed Inuyasha's abilities to shine over the whole court and show off just what Sess has gotten. I am rather intrigued, though, about what this darkness is and what is going on with it and why. Is it something that has been inside him for a long time or something new that came on since the breaking of the collar? Is it a part of the collar that wasn't completely destroyed - only laying in wait?

Finally, poor Kagura. I love her as a character in the manga. Her fierce loyalty... wow. I do hope that she is able to be helped. (I'm also glad that you didn't stop the chapter at the blood section)

Thanks for writing for us. I'm gonna go back and re-read this so far. I sometimes miss things that might be important later!

Nooooo!!!! i'm really starting to hate your cliffies... evil evil... beautiful writer. :P I can't wait for the next part. ^^

It is pretty cool that Jinenji sees Inuyasha as a younger brother. I find Sesshoumaru's actions toward Inuyasha to be almost cute since Sesshoumaru is just getting to know Inuyasha, but how will he react on Inuyasha's human night? That will be interesting.

really great 2 chappie so can't wait to see how inu does with all those demon.

sweet, up date soon

I check for updates every hour on the hour - stop teasing!!

Oh wow that was just so touching and sweetly wonderful. I loved that Jinenji wanted to claim Inuyasha as a little brother which means that no matter what happens the two will always be there for each other in times of stress and need. And the possessiveness and jealousy of Sesshomaru main I loved that it was absolutely priceless and so well I hate to say it but romantically sweet at least in this type of circumstance and it was written quite beautifully. I can't wait to read the courting of little innocent Inuyasha it doesn't matter that he's been raped and abused in the past he is still an innocent when it comes to love and being cared for and loved by another. It also should be really interesting to find out where he comes from and why he was abandoned I mean who abandone such a sweet adorable child like him just so fascinating I'll be waiting for more.

What a fabulous chapter! It's really wonderful to watch a non-bastardy Sess bringing this messed up ex-slave into the light of a whole new day, a whole new way of looking at himself and the world around him. Nice mix of tough-tender in the dialogue, too. And the universe itself, with demons who have packs and pack order but despise the concept of true slavery, very cool!