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I really love this story so far! I check for new chapters every day. Good work! :) Kouga makes a good Seraphim, haha. And I just love Sesshomaru in this story!

Oh, suddenly there are two suitors out for Inu, well, at least one suitor and one hopeful admirer. Great chapter, I like how Inu is starting to respond to Sesshomaru's actions, and is starting to fall for his affection though he doesn't seem to full comprehend that yet. I can't wait for the next chapter. One thing I wonder though: will Inuyasha's long time of captivity, alongside his sexual experience, leave him with any sort of complications, such as needing to be taken a certain way, such as roughly or while restrained? Just wondering (hehe).

looove it!!! I absolutly love it!!! I hope INuyasha will get more confidence with time.. ^^

Koga is such a fun character. I hope you utilize him to the fullest extent.

You review hog (ha, ha... I'm just kidding). I thoroughly enjoyed the portion of this chapter where the different aspects verbally fought over what to wear. I was also hoping for the more subdued white outfit once you mentioned it. Yeah! Inu (human aspect) keep winning the clothing choices it seems you're the one with developed tastes. So... the seraphim's are involved and the stories pointing towards the Jewel of Four Souls a.k.a. "Shikon Jewel". I'm all for leveling the temple and wiping out the corrupt priests and priestess. Get some rest and when time permits update please.

Chapter 16

There were a few really lovely points in this piece. Inuyasha's aspects arguing over what he was going to wear, Sess's desire to touch and lick the hanyou, and Inuyasha's silent vigil over Kagura were only a few of them. I believe that we're going to perhaps see a moment of Inu in the next chapter if his 'sad' comments are to be believed. I enjoyed the slow movements towards one another that the two Shiro Inu are dancing. I wonder if Sess is just waiting on Inuyasha to finally breach the distance himself?

I'm glad that you didn't leave Inuyasha's years of obeying commands by the wayside (i.e. his staying in a room until commanded or not initiating a conversation). Having him leave those mannerisms behind would seem far too quick. I wonder if he will have any moments of PTSD while he is under Sess's care. It doesn't seem like it, but nothing is out of the realm of ordinary here. Perhaps if/when Kouga brings up mention of the collar it might bring things to light that shouldn't have been remembered.

I enjoyed your brief discussion on the differences between Seraphim and Demon healing techniques. I'm glad you gave Manten an ending that wasn't just death. If that were the case, it would almost seem like Inuyasha caused it. This way, it was completely because he gave himself over to darkness. Just rewards. It's just sad that Kagura was harmed. (but then better kagura than inu)

On a side comment, I wonder if/when Inuyasha will start asking questions about Sess's behavior and I wonder who he will ask. Kagura (who perhaps has a history with the cold lord) or Jinenji most likely. That would be a hoot!

Thanks for sharing with us. I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving (if you live in a country that celebrates it, that is)

Chapter 14: I was thrilled with Sesshoumaru's possessiveness and with his self-control. It was good to learn that he plans to court Inuyasha and not just take him. His attentiveness to Inuyasha is unexpected and very nice.

Aw, poor Inuyasha is so overwhelmed! I'm glad that Inuyasha accepted Sesshoumaru's kiss. It would have been bad if he had equated it with the way he had been treated before. Poor guy is so confused! ^_^ It was sad that he didn't believe that he wasn't a slave anymore, but it was understandable.

Jinenji was so sweet in asking Inu to be his brother. It was so cute. I guess he got a bit overwhelmed as well. I'm also glad that he understood Sesshoumaru's actions. He also seems to have discovered something very mysterious about Inuyasha. I hope we find out what it is soon! I'm so excited!

I have to say that I'm worried about the demon king, especially when they find out exactly what Inuyasha is. I have a feeling that he's more than just a human/inu hanyou. ^_^

Nice chapter!

Oh no, I really like Kagura in this one. Hopefully it is nothing too serious that she won't recover from. And, I must say, I love the direction this story is taking. Sesshomaru's almost instinctive attraction to Inuyasha is sweet, and I can't wait to see how their relationship unfolds. Excellent job as always!

That was riviting and wow different. I hope Kagura survives and is not the worse for wear for her protection of little Inuyasha she deserves a medal. And wow an evil inside Manten that one I did not see at all but quite the twist can't wait to see what happens next.

another geart one. see ya soon