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by ajj77sunhawk

person rivergirl
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congrats! Congrats! Congrats! You did it ^_^

Enjoyed the cuddling in this chapter. Looking forward to the rest as you write it.
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
man it's always something. update soon.
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, I love how supportive Sesshomaru is in this fic, so in character, and yet so caring for his tormented little pup. And I love how Inu is falling for Sesshomaru, and learning to embrace having a pack and family, after so many years of abuse. Great story, and I can't wait for more!
person Jillbean
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Two more chapters done so quickly! I love it!
person river girl
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm SO sorry to have to reviewed like usual for every chapter. My computer absolutely died and had to be taken to the shop, so
I've been off line.

That aside, Wow, you've done so much in these past few chapters! I still wonder at how fast Inuyasha is developing, but it makes some sense, as he kept three of his aspects bascially hidden and they are less affected and have now united with him. Actually, makes a lot of sense and I have to keep reminding myself how complicated Inuyasha is! I started wondering about Inuyasha's ancestry when you mentions the Serphim were coming. I like them very much, detailed and real to the story with a very short description that slid in easily. It's good to know that Inuyasha wasn't purposely left and having a mix of all three heritages certainly answers some questions about him. He grows more and more complex and I'm very curious to see how this will turn out.

Keep it up, I know you can do it!
person jdbbrz27
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Actually thank you for stopping hopefully only shortly because it's really hard to read with tears in your eyes. This story is just well beautiful and touching and yet exciting the explanations were mind blowing ingenius and I really thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us all can't wait to see what happens next. Although you are going to finish Strength and not just leave it please don't go breaking my heart.
person Tahirah
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that i am in-love with your story. There is something about it that is soooo addictive to me. I love the way you have taken Shess and Inu and writen a story that hasn't been done before. You have showen that in this story unlike others half-breeds are truily treated theuyasha same as everyone else. But lets get down to it when are we going to get some lemon? Because really the sexual tention between them is soooooo thick plus also i think that in one of the chapters before it happens Inuyasha must face what rape/abuse happened out loud or it will haunt him forever
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
;_; meeeewwwww!!! poor poor inuyasha. it wouldn't surprise me any if the wings in teh temple are his parent's. that woudl be just like those heartless witches. *snarls* they sooo need a good witch-slapping. i can't wait to see what you have planned next.
person Shadowwolf03
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, Inuyash has some Seraphim mixed in with Demon and Human (ha, ha). You caught me by surprise with that cliff hanger move. Now lets see where you go with it. As always very entertaining and enjoyable to read.
person Vyper
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like that Inuyasha is doing well with Sesshoumaru praising him. It is about time that Inuyasha recieved the praise he deserves for all the years of hardship he had to endure.