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for Winter's Chill

by Dante1444

person Mort
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love your description of each character in this, it is breath taking- I am excited to read more and see how this all plays out-
person Peya Luna
schedule November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
reminds me of the traditional eskimo-wedding: the couple gets buried under snow, naked+wrapped into a single blanket...which only leaves you to get warm by fucking or you´ll freeze to death. i wonder what kagome´ll think of their 'survival-technique' once the winter is over and they´re united again...loosing it completely or turn it into a threesome? XD
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I get the feeling that I'm going to love this chapter. I love how Kouga is already seemingly attracted to Inuyasha, and how it seems the normal cues of the wolves are very much in line with a good bit of pack mate sex/cuddling. I can't wait for the next chapter, and hey, you can always claim the sex to be their way of keeping warm against the Ice Bringer!
person Vyper
schedule November 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this story so far, it is very good. Please keep updating when you get the chance to.
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is so exciting, I can't wait for an update. You do a great job with making up new demons. Next chapter please???
person jill
schedule November 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
lol i cant wait hehe
person Vyper
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is very good so far. I look forward to reading more.
person Caitriona
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning. I'm really liking the looks of this piece. I'll definitely be keeping an eye out for future chapters. I like the concept of the demon that jumps from tree to tree to attack it's prey. I also like how closely bound the wolf tribe are to one another and to kagome.

Thanks for sharing
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Its a really good story and I look forward to read where your going.
person jdbbrz27
schedule October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes and how you make it I usually read Inuyasha and Sesshomaru stories but I can get into a really good Inuyasha and Kouga to so I'm hoping this will be one of the better ones the beginning holds some really good possibilities.