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That was so well extremely warm okay I'll admit hot hot hot hot in respect to all 4 partners. I have to admit I was never into the threesome/foursome bit much but you wrote this very well and didn't turn it into anything well super gross and what a way for a human to stay warm although I do have one question how come they never build fires for the night which kind of would make more sense than what they're all doing now not that I'm complaining just curious. You should still make an mpreg I would love to see how you would write it everyone writes mpreg just a bit different just enough to make each one completely unique besides can't help it you could write it I'm sure much better than my imagination could which would explain why I read and don't write. I would love to read Inuyasha mpreggers in this story and both their reactions I can just see the surprised reactions on both their faces in my mind. Gotta admit I kind of well didn't read Inuyasha taking Kouga all that close just sorta skimmed over it I mean I just perfer Inuyasha as the uke period and being plowed not Inuyasha doing the plowing just don't see that one so I just kind of skim over sections like that although I will skim just in case something catches my eye, interest or amusement thank you for this one though loved the interation expecially when Inuyasha was asleep and being molested and screwed royally loved it.

Hey! I am loving your story! Do you have an update list? If so, would you add me to it? Thanks!

Awesome, awesome two chapters! I loved Inu getting to take Kouga, and the four of them, stuck together in a small hut all night...just pure brilliance! And yes, Inu staying "plugged" by Kouga all day is just so beautifully sexy, gorgeous job writing these two. I tried to update for chapter five, but it went to a loading screen and apparently didn't post. But, great job, I can't wait for the next chapter of this gorgeous story. Interesting to see what will develop with Kagome, maybe she'll wind up convienently between the two canines?

ok,for once i´m not commenting about the sex - though it was positively evil from kouga to screw inu like that where he couldn´t move, couldn´t make a sound and had to stay on his cock for hours on end...if not for his demonic healing abilities he´d been sore for days after that marathon session! although, with how often they go at it inu´s probably growing callouses at his opening by now LOL anyway, what i really meant to say is how much i like inu becoming a true member of the pack and enjoying it, one can feel how this is healing his old scars of being mistreated+scorned. though i can´t help but wonder what sess would say if he finds out that the wolfs have basically adopted his hated halfbrother....but what is worse, with how much inu likes living with the pack, will he even wish to leave in the spring and go back to being the odd man out in a human village? and i doubt that kagome would be willing to move into the den where she would be the outsider, plus its too far away from the well aka her family. all in all, i foresee another conflict for the couple (aside from her finding out how exactly they kept warm for the winter) and it makes me wonder if they´ll last in the long turn. btw, did inu mark kagome or just marry her? for i don´t think that kouga could mark him if inu was already in a true youkai-accepted partnership.

Dante,

The country is China. I plugged my email in if you want to talk more. I actually teach English in a the equivalent of a public high school here. While some parts of China and some economic upper layers of society do have heat, the large majority of people here simply wear a lot of clothes. The coat market here is crazy, wild, diverse and definitely a fashion statement among any woman who can afford to indulge.

Curled up in my bed reading, this chapter did make me warm. The sex was great, warm, humorous, and a little surprising for the participants. But I especially loved how Inuyasha is getting along with the pack. As far as getting along with a new social group, being able to play and have stress relief within that group is one of the hardest and most stabilizing activities. Travelers and immigrants often fail in their journeys/sojourns, when they can't find this kind of outlet. Being in a new environment is incredibly stressful, especially when trying to learn the unspoken rules. That brings me to the next thing I'm enjoying, the fact that you've given Inuyasha a way to ask about the unspoken rules, and that Kouga is answering. That is an invaluable tool! Sometimes I wish I had a Kouga! Well, not in all the ways Kouga helps Inuyasha, already have one of those. My handsome wolf is currently dying to drag me around his own adoptive country more, namely Japan.

Well, I'm probably breaking some sort of unspoken rule about real life facts. I'm always happy to talk about traveling. My email is in the box above. I love meeting new people.
Thanks for writing!
~river girl

This chapter helped keep me warm that's for sure. I loved Kouga and Inuyasha doing it right in front of everyone what a turn on especially with well hardly anyone being the wiser for it and the thought of Kouga deep inside of Inuyasha for the rest of the day wonder how many times he came inside of little Inuyasha boy Inuyasha must have been so full by the end of the day huh or at least a part of him anyway. Between the cum and well a huge spear inside of him. He must of been as red as his outfit between the exertion, the fear of being caught and the pleasure he was feeling. Kouga must have been in heaven getting to spend a whole day deep inside such a delicacy nice and warm and tight with his arms full of such a gorgeous human male and putting one over on the whole pack by doing it in public with the famous Inuyasha and being Inuyasha's seme. Would have been hilarious if Inuyasha got preggers without realizing he could get preggers what a joke on the two of them what in the world would they do then with little Inuyasha married to a human girl and Kouga alpha of a pack and suppose to lead by example. I also loved the story about Kouga's shards and Inuyasha saving him and all of that and the little Ginta recalling what he wanted to recall with only a little bit of the truth coming in on it and both the boys reactions and denials to it all that made me laugh so hard I almost fell off my chair it was just so funny the two are so silly when it comes to posturing and trying to appear so tough and unapproachable I loved it can't wait for the next installment gotta do whatever I can to stay warm and these kinds of stories help alot thank you I'll be staying tune.

Dear Dante,

I'm feeling some special sympathy for the characters in this story. I'm currently in a not so modern country for a job and the outside temperature if -4 C at the warmest. It may well be lower. The sum that up, I have no heat, at the moment and am doing a fair imitation of Inuyasha hiding in a cave of blankets. In case you were wondering, your facts are right on! It was a special treat running across your story. I felt like I had company. Thank you for writing. I will keep checking back for the next chapters, me and my computer buried deep from the winter freeze.

I love your character of Kouga. Also, having been through long unheated winters before, the lethargy of the other tribe members is smack on!As well as the halucination when Inuyasha turned human. You're on a role girl, and I love seeing Inuyasha get some good healthy affection! Thank you.

river girl
~river girl

keep up the good work. I really enjoying your story.

really like it oohoh god can't wait for more to come.
was wondering if sesshou will be in it, think you sould make it were they cross paths sometime.

good to see that inu is getting the hang of it -i wonder if kouga is aware that before long he´ll be the one getting screwed. with inu, no 'i´m alpha i always top' nonsense is going to work! and with how ginta+hakaku are responding to inu, and since he doesn´t exactly dislike them either....how about a foursome in that shower-cave? just imagine it: a pile of warm, slippery bodies, writhing and grinding against each other...ok, now i need a cold shower! ;-)