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KICK ASS STORY !!!!! INU&KOGA 4EEVVEERR!!!!

please write another story about after Yasha joined Kouga!!!! PLEASE!?!?!? I can only imagian how cute and full of lemon goodness you could make it! especally if they had pups *puppy eyes*
Please write another story they are just to good!
but thank you for this story. its wonderful and the ending perfect.
Kit

I think you balanced it alright. I was not expecting this story to end in this chapter. I really liked how you did this and I also enjoyed the delicious yaoi lemons. I hope you will write more stories. I want to read more of your stuff if you ever get a chance.

ok, i´ve got to admit that its a nice ending, even though i´m sad that its over....and that you left out the part with kagome freaking out. for somehow i can´t see her being perfectly ok with her husband leaving her alone for a couple of months each year, especially once they´ll have kids - which he would probably take with them as soon as they´re old enough so they can learn youkai-behavior and become part of the pack as well. thats why, as far as i´m concerned, the well is still open and inu convinced kagome it would be better/healthier for her to spend the cold season with her family in a house with central heating while he goes roughing it youkai-style with kouga because he couldn´t stand being cooped up in a human house/staying in kagomes time for so long.

Nearly broke my heart when I thought Inuyasha would leave Kouga because of Kagome. Kouga's solution, and his patience though, was an ending I did not expect, and showed a true understanding and love of Inuyasha. So ya, I'm sad the story is over, but also, I find the end warm and suitable. This has to be my favorite story for Kouga I've ever read. I reallly ached for him, out on his post and when Inuyasha showed up, I could have hugged both of them, or you in relief! I was half terrified that Kagome had followed him up the mountain, very glad she didn't!
Looking forward to reading more of your work.
~river girl

woah. that ended sooner than I expected, but you ended it in a great way! I'm REALLY happy with it. great job!

he didn´t even recognise her at first? man, those wolves truly did a number on him - i´m jealous LOL i like how close kouga and inu are getting to each other, heck if not for the whole 'i´m a guy i don´t talk about my feelings'-nonsense there´d already been love-declarations. i like that inu was kouga´s first and agree with the logic of 'an alpha can´t let anyone top him' (at least officially ;-) btw, am i correct that inu too was a virgin(with men) until he ended up trapped with these horn dogs/wolves? i´m still wary of kagome, even if she agrees moving in with the wolves and to share inu(and herself) with kouga i think she would draw the line at ginta+hakkaku....and what would the elders think of her being the 'breeding bitch' of both their alpha AND inu? i mean, it would be impossible to hide if half of her kids are wolf-hanyous and the other half have inu´s puppy ears...

It was nicely written and cleverly thought out cheers to you. I liked the way you ended it myself I thought it was clever and well sweet and the fact that Kouga loves Inuyasha so much that he was able to let him go says alot I mean we all know that line if you love someone let them go if they come back they love you to if they don't it was never meant to be in the first place or something of that nature and you wrote it perfectly for that and not everyone can do that thank you so much for letting me share in your wonderful story and imagination. There's not to many Inuyasha and Kouga stories I go in for but yours is surely one of them have a super holiday season.

Ahh, that was such a bittersweet ending, sweet in the way they wound up together, yet bitter in that this awesome, awesome fic is over. I really hope inspiration hits you for another fic as yours are just pure brilliance. I don't know if you're looking for ideas, but I think an awesome fic idea would be to have some sort of condition befall Inuyasha in which he finds himself changed into a beta role. Kouga, at Kagome's appeal, could take him into his pack and give him the domination he finds himself needing, and ultimately what was a temporary thing could become a permanent place for Inuyasha. Just a thought. Still, this story was seriously incredible, and I'm so sad it's over, yet glad you ended it in such a beautiful way. Excellent, excellent job as always!

OMG I really want you to have them mate!! Maybe make it a mpreg so once inu is a verified uke he can give his alpha some little pups to follow in their daddy's footsteps. Man I just love this. You really need Hakkaku and Ginta to get together too....I mean they're practically an item.