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by TheKaytla

person kale
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Sess seems more and more confused. He wants his brother killed but he doesn't want him hurt while he's gone. And then when he thinks Inu is finally dead, he's ready to demolish the village.
Someone is in a serious case of denial. I think Sess likes his brother more than he admits. Just for entertainment value.
person SP777
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #7..

Well now THIS is good.
person Vyper
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope that Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha eventually get over this stupid hate and start kissing making up for lost time.
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, I fear Sesshoumaru might be getting ideas. Inuyasha might want to run :) Someone really needs to explain things to him, I fear he might explode in frustration. Which would probably only amuse Sesshoumaru.
person Nesha85
schedule November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I like the way Sesshoumaru is annoying Inuyasha. It is so funny. Update soon. Thanks
schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MAN! Must you leave me hanging? I'm loving this story, I hope your not like me and can finish it LOL Great job with the story.
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story rocks. I love how Sesshoumaru has found a way to annoy Inuyasha so efficiently, and that the hanyou wasn't as easy a kill as he thought. I'm looking forward to seeing the result of the tackle and ensuing conflict. Honestly, Sesshoumaru would save himself a lot of grief by just telling his brother why he's stal-er around him lately. But it wouldn't be nearly as much fun.
person NelaniDC
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be a really good begginning to the story. I hope the next chapters won't be filled with too much angst !! ^ ^
person NelaniDC
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ergh evil Sesshoumaru, can you be at least a little gentle towards InuYasha? I mean dragging him by his untidy wonderful silver mane and launching him to the pool? How cruel !
I'm really captivated by this story now ! It's becoming more and more interesting ! Loved the chappie !
person NelaniDC
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hehe what a way to wake up InuYasha ! Once again we are exposed to InuYasha's colourful vocabulary ! Loved it ! Moving to the next chappie !