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MORE!! MORE!! MORE!!! i love this story!! :)

AAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGGHHHHhhhhh..... I'm hooked. I don't usually read stories with Kagome and the gang in a 'present' setting, but this one looked too interesting to pass up. Now, I'm glad I did, because its very good, but at the same time I SOOooooo can't wait until the next chapter lol. Good story!!!

Yesss!! finally! a new chapter i love this story! i do hope you keep up with it and i can't wait for the next chapter!

looking forward to more of this story. it's really good so far. i kept getting sucked in lol

Can't wait to see where you're going to go with this. More pls :)

I love this story. If you're looking for a beta I would like to help. Keep up the good work.

TAWANDA!!! Heehee. I love that movie. Great story, but I keep thinking 'where's the baby?' I know Kagome must get some help taking care of Malakai, but it seems like he's never with her. That or he's really low matience. Oh gosh, it sounds like I'm talking about a plant or something. Keep up the good work. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Ok…I owe you an apology. I’ve avoided this story because I assumed it was another “Kagome as a whore” story. Boy was I wrong. I loved it. Especially the chapter that let us see into Sess’s mind. I eagerly wait for the next chapter.

I like thus story quite a bit. There are a few questions I have though. Where is Malakai when Kagome is out? I know her mom probably watches him while Kagome is at school. Kago e takes him to see Sango too. I think I just want to see more baby antics and Kagome interacting with him more. Anyway, I look forward to your next chapter. Oh one more question, is Malachai a full demon, half demon, or other?

I like this story. It's is something different from the normal stuff. I also wonder where the baby is. Kogame just goes and does her own thing all the time and doesn't have any of the responsibilities of a mother. It seems like Kogame is one of those annoying teen moms that gives the baby to the grandmother and hardly does anything. I have no idea where the baby is for most of the story, he's mentioned a lot but only shows up like twice in 8 chapters and both times she is passing him off to a sitter. I love your world building and the communications between the characters, very life like. And the mannerisms are very funny. I have one request, please lay off the word god. Not because of a religious thing, just because you use it A Lot. And I mean A LOT, kinda draws my attention away from the story. Thanks and keep writing!