rate_review Reviews

Hi! 

I wanted to review this story before (way before!), but the darn site would not let me do it, so I had to create a whole new acct just to review your story.

I really, really like everything so far. ❤️❤️❤️ The characters, the setting, and the story. ❤️❤️❤️ You don't make them sound dumb or stupid just because they are young and the humor is perfect. 👍🏻👍🏻💖😍👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻💖

Now, after saying that, I have to mention a couple of things that keep bugging me and would not let go. 

1st: On the chapter where Kagome and Sango were having a sleep over, Kagome argued with Sango and while yelling, she said something like "... You didn't give birth to a God damned kid!" 🤯🤯🤯

This greatly bothered me and continuously keeps distracting me from the story. 🤯😬🤯 Why? Because no good loving, caring, mother would EVER say something like that! This made Kagome seem as if she hated being a mother, and resented giving birth to her child. Please, I not just ask, but beg you 🙏🏻 to take away that! It sounds so horrible, and it has keep bothering ever since I read it. 👎👎👎

You could say something like "... you didn't have to give birth to a child, baby, kid" etc. Just don't call her baby something so awful! 😡😡😡

I get that Kagome was frustrated and upset, but even then, no good parent would say something so insulting and demeaning about their kid, no matter how engry they are. 😡

The next thing that bugs me, but really not nearly as much as the previous issue, is that both Kagome and Sesshomaru are so young. I know that this is an important part of the story, but if you could just make them both seniors in HS, and then college, it would be a tiny bit better. Maybe you could say that Kagome is trying  to graduate with everyone else and is working really hard to make up the lost time? Sesshomaru could have to make up some classes and that he missed and that is why he is still in HS? I don't know, maybe I am being stupid and it really doesn't matter, but is just a minor thought.

Otherwise, I love that you also take care of the grammar and spelling in this story and that makes it more enjoyable.❤️

You have no idea how many stories I have dropped after reading just one page because the writer didn't care to fix something like that. So for this, THANK YOU! 👍🏻👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻💖

So to end my super long rant, I will say that your story is amazing (just please remove that awful part mentioned before) is well written, has amazing development, the characters do justice to the original characters, and the ups and downs between Kagome and Sesshomaru are well done.👏🏻💖💖💖👏🏻👍🏻💖

Thank you for sharing your talent and please, pretty please, update soon!

Hugs and best wishes:

JF

Another fantastic chapter! 

Congratulations for achieving what many authors out there can't, you have kept all of us hooked and salivating for more! ❤️ 

Now that Kagome is pregnant again, we are dying to know Sesshomaru's reaction! 

When will you update again? Please don't make us bite our nails waiting! 

Thank you for sharing! 

I really like this story, it is a refreshing take. Keep up the great work!

Really enjoying this story so far looking forward to the next chapter.

Ah!! Thank you for another wonderful update. So glad to hear that you are doing well. Thank you for taking the time to write. Look forward to more! Can't believe there's only a number of chapters left!! What a journey. Though I'm not here often, I do check for your updates :)

I absolutely love this story! 

I absolutely love this story! 

Please please please continue the story is really good dying to read more