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for Poor Jaken

by AmberDDawn

person Anon
schedule March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS NOT FUNNY, IT WAS PAINFUL. JUST CAUSE JAKEN'S UGLY DONT MEAN HE CANT BE HAPPY. END I LOVE THE ENDING
SESSY'S VASSAL IS SOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE IN THIS STORY. AND HE DISERVES SOME HAPINES IN HIS LONLY LIFE ..... AND A MATE
HOPE TO READ MORE STORYS FROM YOU, CAUSE SO FAR I LIKE
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Its very entertaining and different, I would like to see where this story goes!
person Vyper
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story was great although it would have been interesting seeing what the babies looked like since they were both frog and kappa. But enough with the disturbing visuals. Thanks and thank you for not allowing my beautiful Sesshoumaru to mate with Jaken. That would be totally wrong.
person Vyper
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As much as I love lemons this one was interesting to say the least although the visual was quite disturbing. For some odd reason I am fine with this and hope you continue writing.
person Ann10550
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please include a lemon...You have brought us this far... just complete the story arc and give us a lemon. Even Jaken deserves happy time after his trials.
person Vyper
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sounds like even the healer went completely nuts over Jaken. It seems the toad demon has some redeeming qualities in protecting his Lovely.
person Vyper
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Stupid snake demon. I am glad that one is dead.
person Vyper
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Seems like poor Sesshoumaru is going to have to let his retainer go. Poor Jaken just can't control his little self.
person Vyper
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It is interesting that Jaken would be considered quite young. In the show he is treated like an elder mainly by Rin, but that makes sense since she is a young human girl. I feel though that Jaken being loyal to Sesshoumaru should remain by Sesshoumaru's side. He does indeed owe a life debt to Sesshoumaru not only once, but twice since Sesshoumaru brought him back to life after Kyjimbo had killed him. If you do push forward with the frog mating Jaken I would think that hitting one's mate will have to be abolished along with raping ones mate. It would be terribly sad to have Jaken raped by anyone. I know I have used rape in my stories, but it is usually a bad person doing it since only evil people rape people.
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OHhhh my gosh yes I want more I love this take on poor jaken and trust me your title speak for it all this dude is having a hard time I wouldn't want that fat frog on me but please update. I would like to know what happens to the poor thing.........