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Poor Inuyasha!!! Okay I must be disturbed because I love Koga taking Inuyasha. Like it's the natural order or something. Great job showing his trauma, and oh I wanted to slap Kagome when she yelled "sit!"

And THANK YOU for including my Sesshy (Sesshomaru)! I love how protective he is over his baby brother without showing it.

Love this story and love the happy ending!

Damn Naraku! One day he will pay for his villainy! Loved this story.

Oh wow! Though I shouldn't be surprised, I read this story once before.

I just finished reading your story. And I'm pretty much speechless. Though some things still bother me. The first chapter could've been longer, there could've been more smut-scenes.. But that's just my dirty mind, it didn't do anything about the feelings your story made me feel. When InuYasha was so extremely bad hurt, I felt bad aswell, when he and Kouga ... you know what I mean, I felt happy too. It's a wonderful story afterall. Well, you should know, I'm not a big fan of male pregnancy in fanfics, you integrated it quite nicely in your fic, I have to admit that. If I could give you a rating from 1-10 points, I'd give you 74. The end made me happy too, InuYasha and Kouga grew to become a real family, the inu isn't emotionally unstable anymore, Kouga took him as his mate, they have their three pups, it's just so wonderful.. Thanks for the great time I had reading the story, and excuse my horrible grammar in this review, I'm German, I'm just not a native English speaker.. :D

I like your story. It's compelling. There were a few small mistakes in spelling and grammer, but overall interesting and a good read. :)

I thought i posted a review I guess I did not. I lurv this story. I cant believe its over >.< I want more, but not much I can do about that. but any who thanks for the great fic