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for The Bastard's Gift

by Nightbloom

person jdbbrz27
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well as always excellent work very inventive and intriguing I gotta say. I loved how Sessh put his scent on Inuyasha and Sessh's thoughts about it. I was so relieved when he didn't have to mount him a little to early and to traumatic for our sweet little Inu at this time. I am loving the witchy doctor at least she isn't gonna let Inuyasha ruin his health or do anything contrary to his pregnancy and she is sweet as nector to little Katsu so I love that also how she treated Sessh how appropriate of a really good healer. The party sounds like fun and I love Katsu's questions really typical of a kid. I'm just worried now cause of your little cliffy at the end I really hope Sessh saves Inuyasha and shows Katsu that he will protect Inuyasha at least then Katsu might give him a chance if they ever get to that part and I really hope that Kouga's little cub survives Inuyasha's ordeal. And yes I do see the old Inuyasha come out now and again like for instance climbing out of the window and leaving his guards how typical of the old Inuyasha who always proclaimed he could take care of himself no matter what without thinking of the repercussions he can face if he can't handle what ever by himself the little brat I so agree with the healer on the brat part. Yea I'm thrilled I found you on all 3 sites that means more readers for you and anyone who enjoys Inuyasha yaoi should read this great story. By the way if you do ever want to contact me you can always get me at my email site or at my ygallery site same with the same site name as this one. You should do a picture of Inuyasha and Sessh in those celebration outfits on ygallery that would be cool like when Sessh bites Inuyasha or better yet when Sessh tilts Inuyasha's head up and asks if he accepts totally cool. Man I really wish I had some talent for writing or drawing authers and artists like you make it look so easy and I know darn well it's not. Well I'll be waiting for the next brilliant chappie.
person Vyper
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope Sesshoumaru deals with Arashi. That bastard needs an ass whooping badly. Poor Inuyasha, not only does he have to deal with his brother being an asshole.....wait......I guess that is kind of normal for Inuyasha. Anyway I feel for my favorite hanyou. Please let someone save Inuyasha from that bastard wolf demon and maybe even Sesshoumaru if he keeps being an ass. Talk about vain, mirrors all over his bedroom? I say closet pervert. Although I do love the demon Lord.....he is yummy.
schedule May 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poor Inuyasha, everyone treats him like a girl. The being pregnant thing doesn't really help him with fighting, either. Anyways, I look forward to the next chapter! Even though the creep has confronted Inuyasha.
person Rawthorne
schedule May 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!
This is one of my absolute favorite stories and I hope you will keep updating it quickly. Everyone is so well written and the chapter lengths are fantastic. Please keep up the work!
person Vyper
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It seems to me that Sesshoumaru is being very possessive of Inuyasha. I doubt that he would be taking Inuyasha monthly since the demon Lord will most likely become addicted to Inuyasha's cute little body. I just hope that Inuyasha is able to mourn Kouga properly and that Sesshoumaru will through time, come to care for Inuyasha as Kouga did.
schedule May 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good. I dont know whether I find Katsu to be a creepy beautiful disaster or the hidden hero of the story. He actually holds naruko's heart in his chest now. katsu could actually kill him. He is actually the only one that could kill him at this point but you dont know which way the kid rolls. He doesnt trust Naruku but he still met up with him and actually absorbed something from him into his body and listens to his voice in his head. He wont acknowledge him as a parent because he says only kouga and inuyasha have that honor but while he may feal that he is in control of the situation he is only going to end up causing his father heartache with this path that he is taking now and will be his fault because he is playing games with naraku for power banking on the fact that he will be the one to maintain control. he is seven! Inuyasha hasnt even had a chance to mourn Kouga yet and he is in a power struggle poor thing and he doesnt know whats going on behind the scenes with his son and sesshomaru realy has some nerve. He gave Inuyasha an ultimatum/order 7 years ago and expected him to follow it blindly without any regards to how inuyasha felt. When inuyasha didnt do what he wanted sesshomaru had the nerve to feel betrayed. Here is someone else that doesnt want inu's son around. Maybe with good reason, we dont know at this point, but he stil wants him gone. Inuyasha is just suffering all around here. All around. The wolf pack just wants him to submit to Arashi and when they find out about the cubs they want to take them too. I really hope that inuyasha actually turns this around. I was wondering, is your inuyasha character suppoused to be this weak of spirit and body? not talking about while he is pregnant because he seemed like he took on a weak submissive persona to kouga's personality in this story versus the canon. not conplaining, totally agreeing with writer liscence to do at will with there story, just trying to make sure that I understood the context of the story to continue my reading pleasure. looking forward to the net chapter.
schedule May 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It's sad that they won't be able to sleep together like that anymore. It seems so comfy and loving. And it seems like Seshomaru is falling for Inuyasha 0.0. Maybe he will stop being such a hard ass. And I don't really know what the whole situation with the unborn baby will be like, but if I was Inuyasha, I would be out the door as soon as possible. Can't wait for more, keep it up!
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I LOVE THIS STORY! The characters are all so complex and there are so many conflicting goals. For some reason, I love these fics that portray Inuyasha as a beautiful but still Inuyasha. I look forward for more!
person Vyper
schedule April 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love how Sesshoumaru reacts to Katsu calling him Uncle. It is so cute! I still hope that Katsu will not listen to Naraku since the bastard will just try and absorb him as he gets stronger.
I look forward to more chapters so I hope you keep this going.
person jdbbrz27
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhh Naraku needs to be beaten into oblivion for trying to entice that sweet innocent Katsu he makes me so mad. Although seeing the interaction between Sesshomaru and Katsu should be very interesting I mean a percocious kid and an arrogant overbearing Uncle that combination is always funny and poor little Inuyasha trying to keep the peace. I mean Inuyasha of all beings trying to keep those two in line when most of the time he's the one being percocious funny situations could occur. Then we have the three clowns added to the crazy circus Ginta, Hakaku and Jaken man would I love to be a fly on their wall except well with Sesshomaru and Katsu around I'd be dead before I ever got to laugh. Great job I loved Kouga's will very touching and prophetic really good job with that. Can't wait for the next chappie. And on y gallery entanglement I think it's called is going great to I am so happy I started reading your great story and the really good what is it again doujin or whatever you are doing a superb job on both thank you.