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Please ohh PLEASE continue with making her pregnant!!!!!

well i fancied the story and think it was original all the way....so yeah lol give us some more!

I really liked this! (hot and funny as hell. Its rare for a writer to make those two elements come out good in a go, but you pulled it off). I prefer Inu/Kag over Sess/Kag so this was a definite win for me and the good part was that it a long oneshot as opposed to the short ones. Thanks for that! About 'Salvation', I've been having a writer's block with it for months and sort of taken on a request from a friend of mine (for Ouran High), but I'll try to get down to it. =)

Please give me an email at either the one above or
kauserudk@ymail.com
Its about hide and seek
so sooo sorry to comment on your story
you don't have an email up so...sorry again.

Hello, its been a long time and I am so sooo sorry I-. Let me actually start this over,Thank you so much for your support. I am sorry to message you here but there is no other way on this site.I hope you remember me!? But I came here to tell you. The game of Hide and Seek is not over. I am picking it up again and it will be filled with epic chapters. Thank you so much for your support and posting my story on your main page!

Sincerly
Rosuki

P.S. Awesome story! I seriously love this show!

Ooo such an awesome story! Great job! You really stayed in character the whole way! I'm very impressed ^^

Well, my dear, I have to say that was quite entertaining, and a delightful introduction of your writing to AFF. I was just taking a peek at the I/K fic page, looking for anything new that might be interesting, noticed your fic and was taken with it within the first few paragraphs. The imagery, especially in the beginning, was just lovely. The character interaction, especially between Inuyasha and Miroku, was hilarious. And, of course, the naughtiness was OH so hot!

There were quite a few IY fanfic cliches scattered throughout like you warned, but none of them proved to be a deal breaker for me (and that's a major compliment. I'm notoriously snotty about what I'll read and what I won't, and fandom cliches are a major peeve of mine). Your writing is smart, creative and full of imagery, and your sentence structure flows beautifully. Just a quick note: there were a few places, especially at the end of sentences that led into dialogue, where I believe you meant to put periods instead of commas, but they might have just been formatting errors. Either way, no worries. For your first fic here, I was impressed! Keep polishing your skills and you'll be a brilliant writer!

By the way, I didn't realize you were one of my reviewers until I'd finished reading and was checking your bio. I RARELY find something that I like enough to leave a review, but with the combination of your sweet words for my fic, and this display of your own skills, I just had to return the favor!

That was really really good, It was an excellent story, everything, it was funny, sexy, the lemon was great, the knot was an incredible idea. I really enjoyed "I Gotta Feelin", congratulations for this excellent work

wow what writing. I loved it. will there possibly be more added?