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May 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Please Update this!!!!!
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January 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, wait. You're just gonna leave me hanging like this????
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February 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh my... so gorey. very well written. and you were right it is a very clever take on the whole male pregnancy idea, with Sesshomaru being forced to be the container, dare i say the womb for Naraku's little flesh monsters. Great job!
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August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was really something. I'm actually not that unfamiliar with guro, though, but quadruple amputee? Whoa. Anyways, I kinda knew what I was getting into with your warning. At least it didn't go into castration. =O
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy... o_O
You have a very sick and twisted mind, madame. Definitely an interesting read, and creatively done. This is a perfect example of real sadism, not the watered-down generic version most people think is shocking. The visuals are extremely striking.
There are a few grammar things that could have been beta'd, but overall, the intensity of this scene is gripping regardless of those.
It would be interesting to see how you would continue with this story if you didn't keep it as a one-shot.
You have a very sick and twisted mind, madame. Definitely an interesting read, and creatively done. This is a perfect example of real sadism, not the watered-down generic version most people think is shocking. The visuals are extremely striking.
There are a few grammar things that could have been beta'd, but overall, the intensity of this scene is gripping regardless of those.
It would be interesting to see how you would continue with this story if you didn't keep it as a one-shot.
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I find this intriguing. I'd like to read the rest of the story you have planned. You have a talent for writing torture.