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for When The Lines Blur

by LordYouko

person Anon
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the kinkiness, different from all the other stories & nicely done.
person natasha
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great chappie soooo can't wait for more to come out of this story.
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was really intriguing. I liked it a lot.
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That may honestly be the single best piece of Inu/Sess writing I've ever had the pleasure of reading. I read the first part last night, fell asleep, and came back to write a review only to see that you'd updated! Seriously, this story is so amazing. The brutal relationship between the two is to me a perfect definition of the whole Master/Slave relationship. How they are both in love with each other, though they don't say it and they express it in a vicious way. I love it. Not to mention, the various scenarios you listed sound so amazing, you have to expand on them in future chapters. And of course, anything with spanking turns me on like a light switch and that is the best piece of it I've read! Excellent, excellent work. I can't wait to read more of this amazing piece of art.
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't really know how I feel after reading these chapters. I feel saddened yet thrilled. Inuyasha's blind adoration is really endearing but it makes me want to cry at the same time. Sesshoumaru is acting like how I picture he would in real life but I kind of hope he is OOC just so Inuyasha could heal. On the other hand, I can't help but like Sesshoumaru for still being an ass. I am so CONFUSED. The only thing I'm not confused about is that I want to read more. Please keep it up.
person chibinelly
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this fic and I really like it. I feel so bad for Inuyasha. Poor Inuyasha. I get angry with Sesshoumaru for punishing him so.
person chibinelly
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update.
Sesshoumaru is really sadistic but he does care somewhat for his brother. That's why he doesnt want others to hurt him. He's just too arrogant enough to admit it to himself. But I really hope he would at least stop verbally abusing Inuyasha. It hurts him more than phisical abuse.
Great chapter !
person LlamaLlamaDuck
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
person natasha
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
really great story line. i sooo hope you keep it going.
person Nesha85
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It a new idea for me. Inuyasha is usually not so tamed in the story I have read of him and Sesshoumaru. I wish Inuyasha would have more fire to him. I like the story and will continue to read. I want to know if Sesshomaru will come to love his little brother.