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for When The Lines Blur

by LordYouko

schedule January 1, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Love this story - wish it wasn't abandoned!

schedule March 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Inuyasha. I like that Sesshomaru is giving Inuyasha that bit of comfort when he needs it, it shows he's a good dominant for Inuyasha. Brutal and sadistic, but then what else would do for such a tempermental dog like Inu? I hope Sesshomaru does come to realize his deeper feelings for Inu soon, as it seems to be tearing the poor pup apart. Great chapter, I hope you update soon!
person dragon1727
schedule January 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please write more, this is a really good story...
person Tepi85
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can you write a chapter on the details of chapter 1 Para 4 (starting from the bottom) Expaining the details of this actually happening..... how Sesshomaru does this?
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Inuyasha. I do hope Sesshomaru returns to him soon, and hopefully gives him the punishment and then the comfort he so desperately needs. I have to say, as sad as this chapter is, it's so brilliantly in character for both of them, and it's so heart-wrenchingly beautiful. Excellent, excellent work, and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person NelaniDC
schedule November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww you can't end it here :-(
Poor InuYasha. I feel so bad for him (*sigh*)
Can't wait to read the next chappie ^ ^
person ILoveWyatt
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it!

Cant wait for more!
person natasha
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great chapie, so can't wait for more.
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The sound echoes in the quiet night, as if the universe holds its breath to listen to the hanyou break.

What a beautifully haunting line...I like this fic and I can't wait until you update!
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Sess loves his little brother, in his own sadistic way. That was so brutally sweet, I can't wait to read more!