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for Beyond Friendship: Be Who You Are

by LordYouko

schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this chapter cant wait for more i really want to see what Inuyasha is going to do when he wakes up.
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehehehehe, I love it! Sesshy is really getting into it with his little Inu, I love it. And while I do feel for Inu, his past sounds horrifying, it's nice to see that Sess is ready to give him what he needs. I wonder, if he'll use this as an excuse to tie his puppy up, so he won't get any ideas and run off? Still, great work, and I can't wait to read more.
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm getting the idea that Inuyasha's previous pain and current needs can definitely be matched consensually with Sesshomaru. The chemistry is spot on. Only, Sesshomaru is right in being concerned about Inuyasha's reaction when he wakes, since he was not in a position to consent.

I am happy to see a little bit behind the curtain when it comes to Sesshomaru, but I'm still curious about some of the other things that he was hiding. I guess I will just have to hope you will update soon... please. :)
person Ivy
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Liked how you illustrated both characters' emotions.
person nchsmi
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor InuYasha! So much drama for one so young, it's heartbreaking! As a mom myself, I would throughly enjoy castrating anyone who would even dare to look at anyone of my kids wrong! Then, I'd shoot them in the crotch with my hubby service gun, and bury them in the pen under the doghouse! Death to all molesters! But, I was a little surprised at Sesshomaru's reaction. It seemed typial that he was in a murderous rage by what Inu was telling him. But, was it my imagination, or was he getting a little turned on by what he was hearing? Anyway, it was a good chapter. I would love to read the next one. I'm now really curious as to how this will pan out for both of them! And, I would love to know what InuYasha's mom's reaction was to what Naraku was doing to her son, or did she ever find out? I don't think that you could keep something like this a secret from a mom for long. A mother that is really intune with her child, would pick up on things. And, from what I've seen and read about Izayoi (Episodes and Mangas), she was an exceptionally loving mother to InuYasha!

And, what the hell happed to Naraku anyway? Did Izayoi have him arrested? Did she pull up stacks in the middle of the night, took Inu and ran with him? Does he show up in the story later, or did InuYasha decide he couldn't take it anymore, snapped and killed him long ago?

Great story, until next time...
B reading U!
person Vyper
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Sesshoumaru is such a sexy beast. I absolutely adore Sesshoumaru and I hope that he mates Inuyasha.
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh sesshoumaru is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot. hot hot. please, next chpater, can's wait. though i am sad that he wasn't inuyasha's first.
person dar
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah i just reread the last chapter and such a cliffie! I can't wait to read what happens to inu and what exactly is the attraction sessh has to inu!!! THank you!!
person Toni
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey loved the story. Hope you write more. later
person HunterJumperLuvr
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I'm not a huge Modern Day fic fan...but this was brilliant. I'm so impressed by it that I actually reviewed, I never review uncompleted stories. I don't know if you have one, but I can do some beta-ing if you want me to, just send an email to me at yothatsillogical@rocketmail.com!