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CLIFF HANGER AGAIN!!!! NOOOOO POOR KAGOME!!!! INUYASHA SAVE HER!!! amazon story it keeps gotten better!!! **gasps** if u don't want me to die from waking u will update... Soon!!!!!!

Oh an I'm still gonna guess bankutso he culd use his brothers/ the band of 7 to kidnap kagome!!! Mhm that's my guess!

IM GUESSING EITHER NARAKU OR KOUGA!!!!!! did we ever hear kouga's last name???? Uhhh I don't remember... Anyway, those are my guesses... OHHH!!!!!! OR BANKOTSU!!!!!!! Great story cannot WAIT for a new chapter!!!!!!!!

Why did you delete my review? If you can't take criticism then don't post your story. I wasn't even mean, I just told you how annoying your lack of pronoun usage was and spelling inuyashas name with a hyphen was. So at least answer my question before you delete this review. And I'm trying to HELP you. Fixing those few problems will make a lot of people read your story. And more people would rate it besides youself. And I will keep reviewing eveytime you delete what I say.

If I came across as rude I apologize that wasnt my intention in the review. And yes you can spell inuyashas name however you want I just think it's easier to read without the hyphen, it's like putting a pause in the middle of his name. I do hope however you really will use more pronouns, because if you don't mind me saying it actually is annoying to read someones name 4 times in a sentence. And So you know they don't always use a hyphen in the manga, I think that's just maybe the first 8-10 books or so.

AHHHHHH!! CLIFFHANGER!!! NOOO!!!!!! god!!! I really really like this story and I'm dying for a new chapter!!!!

Loopy!!!! This story is really good!!!!!!! Please ease have an update soon!!!! When does that main stalker guy come in.... Ugh... Shoot, well whatever the main stalker's name in when does that dude come in????? (I say main becuz that's who InuYasha's agency knew aboutand the other one is Kouga-kun.)