rate_review Reviews

Woo-hoo! Great lemon! Oh! and a great chap lol! Obviously that wasn't supposed to happen. I kept expecting him to say that right before the slam-bam but it looks like you were eager for sex and angst lol. I won't complain. Lol. Poor Kagome, though! She's probably going to be horrified. Again, great chappie. Hope to see a quick update on chap 7!

Woah! Chap 4 was crazy! And totally awesome! Angsty, but awesome. I was wondering how you were going to handle that. I figured Kikyo would die, but wow! You handled everything really well. The emotions were exploding everywhere. I thought the way you handled Inuyasha throughout the whole thing was very well played.

And then Chap 5! You amaze me [us] again with a quick update! You, my friend, are unpredictable. Lol. I hadn't checked AFF for about a week, due to school starting up and being busy with that, and then I look and OMG there's not one, but TWO chappies! YAYYY! lol.

I was curious about how you'd bring Kagome into the story. Never would I have thought she'd be the annoying neighbor, lol. GAH! Your cliffy's are cruel! Look forward to the update, which I hope is atypically soon *wink wink*!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! oh... WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's all I can say!!! But another thing.. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!! Isn't this supposed to be InuYasha and Kagome?? (not that I have anything against Kikyo) ....

*sighs dramatically* I check AFF practically every day to see if you've updated. It's killing me waiting to see what happens in Chp 4, it really is. Please end my suffering, lol. Great job, btw!

Love this story so far and the plot that you have going for this story also and I can't wait for the next chapter you are a very good writer.

Again; like the new chap (3). I can't believe you left it like that! :-)
Hope to see a quick update! Don't let petty things like bills, work, and life get in your way!
Good job!

Like the new Chap! I definitely like your writing style. I can't wait to see what happens next in the story, I'm excited! I like how you updated very quickly, keep it up lol!

Wow! I realy like this story, and I'd like to see how it turns out...

Please update soon.

Love the plot u have going for ur story u are a very good writer and I hope to see new chapter in the next two week or so if u can lol. Oh I almost for got to say love the story very new and good ideas

Very good start! I'm intrigued! I don't think I've ever read a Kikyo that was actually filled with remorse from cheating on Inu. I like how he's rightfully furious instead of ignoring the truth. I like the plot so far, don't think I've ever read about him being a cop [homicide detective] before. I'm excited about where you'll take this story! I'm definitely going to keep up with it! Hope to see an update soon! Take care.
*~*Evility*~*