rate_review Reviews

This is really good it would be cool to read a continue of it

I know I've read this story before but I still enjoyed myself. I only wish there was more because I'd love to know what happened afterwards. Especially since she basically just slipped away from the cave in the middle of the night. I love reading from his POV and I'd love to know what his thoughts were and what was going through his mind. I'm also curious about how Sessh knew how to find her, how long he'd wanted her, why he chose that night to make his move, and why he'd never tried to express his interest in her before (that night), even if it meant getting her alone.
Sorry for writing such a long review and thanks for posting this, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Quite fun to read

I want more of this story please.

I liked both chaps. However I was a bit confused since the second chap didn't match up with the first both were good. I hope that there is a whole story to the second chap looks interesting.

I like this short story & the only thing that could make it better would be if it were longer.

Please update soon ok.

That...was...AMAZING!!! I LOVE the way you are very descriptive in each and every sensation they were feeling. This takes the cake...WOW!

i really love it specialy because it wasnt the normal characters it ws sessomaru and kagome both characters that hate each other makeing love together now its someting no one expects it to happend so in that part i love it th other part is when they make love its like they wer eman for eachother good job i love it keep up with the good work

this should not be a one shot you should so continue on with the story i loved it