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for With You

by InuAnimekid417

person hotbabe
schedule July 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The last two chapters are so passionate and hot! After the long wait finally they made it to the home run lol! If Sess thought that he could get Rin to stop loving him he has another thought coming!! Besides i dont think that he will be able to walk away now that he has tasted her... cant wait to read how long he will last from resisting her. Thanks for the update!
person Vyper
schedule July 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gods, Sesshoumaru can be such an ass sometimes. He deserved to be slapped for what he said. I hope he comes to terms with his feelings for Rin.
person hotbabe
schedule June 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've been waiting ages for you to update your story! Im so happy and thankful that you didnt abandon it. This chapter is exciting because finally Rin made her move! I dislike Sesshumaru for being so cold. But Rin shouldnt give up! She should fight for want she wants. I bet Sesshumaru would crumble if Rin seduces him further! I hope you update soon!!!
person pammy
schedule June 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I l?ove it but need more. Please tell me what i can do to get another chapter soon? My heart aches for Rin.... Perhaps sessh should see what its like if men were peeking on rin! Ha! Never realise how much u value something when its in anothermans hands lol please email me
Pammy
person Vyper
schedule June 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
After Rin threw her heart on the line, I hope Sesshoumaru will change his heart. Poor Rin is going to be so heartbroken.
schedule June 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please let me know when you update this story! angelicsheila1978@yahoo.com
person Rawthorne
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so far. It is set up so well. I hope you continue it, perhaps a lil faster then you have been, because I am dying to see how it turns out! You do adult-ish Rin so well.
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome beginning :3
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, it's getting so exiting! Poor sesshomaru!
schedule April 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i can't wait to read the rest of you'r story! you got youirselkf a loyal reader here!