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by InuAnimekid417

schedule August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I Love IT!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter. I'm dying to know how Sesshomaru will behave. Very interesting indeed, keep going!
person hotbabe
schedule August 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! What a surprise!! I didnt expect that this story would extend this far. Everything went fast forward from the last time they separated and now suddenly they have a child. Is this the ending part of the story? I wish they could have more moments together though. Tneir union took soooo long and when it did it was over so quickly and now they have a baby.... will sesshumaru accept the child?
person PUMPKINPI
schedule August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh Sesshoumaru had his one night stand with Rin and gets a supirise when he returns to the village, a supirise that looks and behaves like him. Great stuff look forward to more!!!
person Niako
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great Sesshoumaru and Rin have a daughter and she looks just like her dad. I think Sesshoumaru should be an extra good father because he missed the first few years of his child life.
person Azanigin
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaahh, this is awesome. I wonder how big bad daddy sesshy goin to react next chapter. I hope to read it soon!!! He needs to get that stick out of his ass ;)
person Peya Luna
schedule August 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
why are men always so surprised to learn that a girl they sleep with ends up pregnant?!
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww, what happened to Miroku? Oh well no matter, I really liked how you handled the 'meeting' at the end there. I knew what was up from the instant Kohaku told Sesshoumaru he really needed to go back and see Rin, but that just meant I was eagerly reading the rest on the edge of my seat. Well done! Super looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much...! Please, just continue!!
person Vyper
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what Sesshoumaru will do now that he has a daughter. If he is honorable he will take Rin as his mate and take his child with Rin to his home. I hope he does so.
person dee
schedule August 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very good but when is sesshy gna relize he loves her?... o update soon plz... i cant stand the wait