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April 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmm truly interesting the characters you would think be affected are not well done
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
personally i think your writing technique and character personalities need alot of work. And that's really rude to steal someones story plot and then bash them for it.
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is pretty good so far. I hope to see more.
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to add my own comments! I think this is a promising story.
There are a few errors here and there BUT nothing that can't be fixed.
I'm sorry the other reviewer was so negative. Update soon and I'll
definately check it out! I have to see the interaction between Sesshomaru
and Kagome! Good luck!
There are a few errors here and there BUT nothing that can't be fixed.
I'm sorry the other reviewer was so negative. Update soon and I'll
definately check it out! I have to see the interaction between Sesshomaru
and Kagome! Good luck!