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August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good work increasing the length of the chapter. I really like the chacater development. But I can not wait to read the next chapter. I want to know if Sesshomaru is as cold as he acts and if she passes the test will he let her in the pack.
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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another really good chapter! I hope someone else will be nice to Mizuki too. It's sad that Kat-sama is the only one.
Oooh, and what a mystery you've made, with who his mother is! I'm very curious now. :)
Oooh, and what a mystery you've made, with who his mother is! I'm very curious now. :)
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August 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!* a very very good chapter!!!! Yeah, That's right Inu-SERVANTS you leave Mizuki ALONE!!!! Great great chapter I can't wait to see what this initiation thing is!!! You're keeping your readers in suspense!!!!!! ...that's. Good thing in an author you sly fox! Well, as usual, I'll be pining for the next chapter!! If I don't review after the next chapter, its because I died not knowing what happened to Mizuki!!!!! *flails arms crazily* lol just kidding ;)
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August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think she should do the test. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will join? You have written Sesshoumaru character very well. I enjoy reading so write more soon. Also try to write longer chapters. Thanks
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whoo!! I'm helpful!! ^.^ oh Mizuki is a really good name I love it!! And now: reviewing! I think it's cruel but a good story line the way Sesshy treats Mizuki. (YAY a name!!) but Kat (oh I'm so calling him Kat) is such a nice guy!!!! He lends out kimonos, gives her food, says if you offer your body you can be free... Well that last one kind of sucks but whatever! Still an amazing story!!! Good luck with the experimentations with italics, and I'll be anxiously waiting for a new chapter!
~Christi
~Christi
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August 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one. *dances*
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July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am interested in what Sesshoumaru will have her do for her test. But I think it is too soon for a test considering that she can not even stay awake.
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July 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I really like the way this is going! The characters are intriguing and the plot is really good!! Now I am piqued, I want to know what sort of tests will Sesshomaru have the little Inu do in order to prove herself. And there are so many questions! Who is she? Where did she come from? Who is her family? How did she land in the hands of the slavers? Will Sesshomaru's son develop feelings for her or her for him?
I am really looking forward to your next update!
Thank you for writing and sharing!
I am really looking forward to your next update!
Thank you for writing and sharing!
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No I don't know about italics I am sorry. Maybe, instead of italics, for whatever you were going to use italics for you could always use ***** astricks!!! **this could mean thought past or whatever!**
I am honored you mentioned me! That's so cool!!! I will be anxiously waiting for another amazing chapter! Quick question: does our new half demoness have a name?? And if not, maybe you could go to the link below! (and if you have a name and I didn't notice it.. Wow I'm oblivious!!!!)
http://www.20000-names.com/
I am honored you mentioned me! That's so cool!!! I will be anxiously waiting for another amazing chapter! Quick question: does our new half demoness have a name?? And if not, maybe you could go to the link below! (and if you have a name and I didn't notice it.. Wow I'm oblivious!!!!)
http://www.20000-names.com/
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July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I can't wait to find out what the test will be. I hope she does a good job!