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for Initiation

by Angels9191

schedule October 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey; i've been trying to get on here so i could leave you and some other people so reviews but you had to be a member first to do that.
but i really love your story and the story line you have going here, feel so bad for sesshou son and that poor little girl.hope you keep up
the great work you have going here for this story.
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! I want them to be happy <3
And i cant wait to read more...i really hate sesshy in this thou XD
Is his hate for hanyous about inuyasha or its something more in this story?
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CLIFFHANGER?!?!?! KYAAAAAAAAAA-.- ur cruel to us. But yes! I'm still alive and still reading this amazing story!!! Woot Woot! Mizuki's favorite color is purple!! Like mine!!! ^.^ Ahhh great chapter!!!! Update when you have the time!!!
schedule September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter! It's sad that she's so upset right now and is not trusting anyone anymore. She's lost all of what little progress she made with Kat-sama. He better work hard to build it up again!
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OHHH I LOVE IT!!!!! I feel so bad for both Mizuki and Katsuro!!!! YES I am still a faithful reader!!!!!
person Nesha85
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you are progressing just fine with the story plot. I enjoyed reading the chapter. Update soon.
person midcat
schedule September 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I am truly surprised. You are barely a freshman in college and have such a wonderful dominion of the language and excellent spelling and diction!

The story is very well crafted and original, and I can only say that I have read hundreds of stories and have seen people who even teach not able to craft a story as well done as you have! I admire you and the gift that you have, and can only hope you continue to cultivate it for it is a true gem!

The characters have enough depth, the setting is really well done, the narrative was perfect and detailed enough to create a mental picture of everything going on, and to e honest, I can't find anything at all to indicate that you are such a young writer!

I truly look forward to your next update, and hope you will be able to gift us with another chapter soon!!

Thank you so much for writing and sharing with us! Keep up the excellent work, you really are an amazing writer!

Best Wishes:

MidCat
person Nesha85
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No Niako has not stop reading. I have been checking to see if the story had been updated. Poor Kat! I hope everything works out for him and she understand that he had no choice.
schedule September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Mizuki, poor Kat. I hope they get happiness eventually. It is a fun story to read though! I'm glad you updated, and congrats on getting into College!
person midcat
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter! Loved everything about it and I'm truly enjoying the interaction between the main characters! I would love to see a physical description of Katsuro from Mitzuki's point of view.

I am very happy that you updated and look forward to the next chapter with anticipation. Please update soon and let us know what happens next!

Thank you for writing and sharing!

MidCat