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I hope to read more of "The Guardian" but it seems it's been awhile since you've posted a new chapter. Are you going to continue?

Good start! I like your twist on everything so far. I'm interested to see how you handle the story from here. There are a few grammatical errors but, eh. Good job and I look forward to more.

Interesting story! I do hope Inuyasha tones it down. It's hard to cheer for them when he's such a prick. Still, he was pretty obnoxious in the series as well, when they first met. Looks like her power is calling to him and he'll calm down around her. I like the world you're constructing around them. Shippo comes off well. I'm kind of sorry he's so much older than in canon since he can't form the same bond with her. Love the way all the characters are blended in so naturally. Kaede as a human with a supernaturally long life, Miroku teaching Inuyasha spells, we haven't even seen them yet, but they're already vibrant. Good writing and I look forward to more.