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for The Alpha and the Daiyoukai

by Neptunesdemon

schedule November 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your characterization of Kouga - submissive but with that wolfish animalism that's so him. It's a rare pairing, unfortunately and even rarer that the author manages to keep them in character, like you have. I love the fact that you kept Kouga as an alpha instead of making him a submissive; he's just not a natural submissive. Of course, Sesshoumaru can turn anyone into an uke but that's the good part. Kouga's battle with himself, as an alpha that finds himself wanting to submit, is very well written.

I read in one of your author's notes that you were considering making it an mpreg. It's a good idea, though I hope you don't plan on making Sesshoumaru endure his crankiness and insubordination just because he's pregnant. So many authors do that but I just can't see Sesshoumaru letting an uke go without punishment even if they're pregnant.

I hope you turn this into a long story and update soon.
schedule March 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Sooooo Kinky, looks like most of the gang had fun with that toy! Wonder what Kagome will do with it after she finds out what they all did with it! Love it!!!
person Vyper
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It would be fun to have all four sexy males enjoying each other. Especially if Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru get it on together. Sorry, I am a sucker for Inu/Sess incest. It would be fricking hilarious for Sesshoumaru to be Inuyasha's uke, but whatever works right?
person me not you
schedule November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
do not make this a multi chapter fic. you have not finished unexpected circumstances.
and p.s you have plenty of reviews for unexpected circumstances, but clearly that has not "inspired you to work faster"
person Vixen12089
schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is good so far, but PLEASE no mpreg. It gets tiring after while. Too many people do it and I feel that it's better without it. Thanks for another great story.
person yoko0525
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is awesome!!! \w/ it would be funy the mpreg, hey sesshou-sama you remember those many times in the cave well now there a gift... ajajaja hilarious XD

Hey there this idea in my mind... you should make the toy's bateries to die!!! so they'd had to go to kagome and Sesshoumar being who he is make her go for more, can you imagine... awkward situation between kagome (because of what it is), Inuyasha and Miroku (they started the whole problem and oh so merry memories) and Kouga (the smells like him). I don't know if it interesting for you (and I don't if I'm explaining myself wel enough :S) but, if anything there's my email.

bye till next time.
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was phenomenal! Excellently done, and so very hot! I'd love you to continue on with this fic, and possibly incorporate a chapter with both Kouga and Inu under Sesshomaru's devilishly good ministrations. Seriously though, that was beautifully written and so damn hot, excellent work!
person clarissa
schedule August 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great story i'm hooked only after the first chapter. Definitly keep going hopefully making it into a full fledge mpreg story great ideas for that brewing
schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really loved the way you connected this story with your first one. Inuyasha's brothers isn't as much of a prune as the younger sibling thinks he is. In fact the daiyoukai is a kinky freak in the "bedroom" department! And Kouga learned this first hand! I hope you continue!!!
person TheNeptuneFan
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was a very interesting story! i like :). why have you not updated unexpected circumstances yet?!!!!