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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OC characters, being unfamiliar to readers, normally seem less interesting and sympathetic to them. However, you have managed to make Kitaru a sympathetic and likeable figure capable of moving Sesshomaru with his innocence. I hope that whoever he is running away from won't prove too much for his new master to handle. They have to be harder to deal with than the rather silly foxes they sent!
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the 'masters' to come and confront Sess I can't wait for him to kick their ass. I really like this chapter and I think that your character you developed is very sweet and I look forward to learning more about him.
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I must say, I usually have trouble getting into Original Characters in fandom, but you've done such a good job Kitaru seems like an integral part of the Inuyasha universe. Excellent work!!! I love how perfectly the characters have been captured, and the ideas are excellent. The stone in particular is brilliant. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, water aerobics, creative! Great chapter, look forward to the next one!!!
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so far so good ^.^ I cant wait to read more.
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May 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice OC! As for the story... Kinky!!! I look forward to more:-)
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg more more more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was nice, I can't wait to read more. I'd like to see what else Sess comes up with to torment his new slave.