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March 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I found that sooo hot! I found the ending cute and fluffy! XD
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June 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
WOW, i loved it, like always!
i really liked how you are braking his slef pitty, and need ot slef punish, i dont belive someone could acually live like that for ever after they where showen a kinder life. i hope he will be able to grow and come to put this stuff fully behind him soon!
i really liked how you are braking his slef pitty, and need ot slef punish, i dont belive someone could acually live like that for ever after they where showen a kinder life. i hope he will be able to grow and come to put this stuff fully behind him soon!
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June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Especially the ending. That would be one hell of a night for Kitaru, having to wait until morning to relieve himself. And having Sesshoumaru cuddling him certainly wouldn't help when he's trying to keep his body under control. Maybe you can add something of his thoughts and feelings during the night in the next chapter?
I also loved the part about Sess nibling on Kitaru and how Kitaru unconsciously loves being treated as Sess's food item. "He dipped his head down and let himself go a bit, latching his mouth and teeth onto the meat of the boy’s neck where it met his shoulder. Kitaru gave a soft cry of pleasure at the action, and his body moved restlessly under his master, starved for affection." Leading the kind of life he has led, Kitaru would be severely starved for affection and Sess's domination and the overwhelming pressure of his personality and aura would be the only thing that could satisfy him. If Sess ever decided to ignore him or withdraw his attention and affection even for a very short time, poor Kitaru would be frantic and in a panic.
I hope you will explore the dynamics of their relationship more in the future; I love how they are both exactly what the other needs. Kitaru can give the kind of unconditional, blind, clinging affection that Sess needs.
One of the subtle great points of your writing: Sesshoumaru thinking of Kitaru as "his boy". That was just so perfect.
I can't wait to see what Sess's idea of a "proper" collar is. I hope you update soon!
I also loved the part about Sess nibling on Kitaru and how Kitaru unconsciously loves being treated as Sess's food item. "He dipped his head down and let himself go a bit, latching his mouth and teeth onto the meat of the boy’s neck where it met his shoulder. Kitaru gave a soft cry of pleasure at the action, and his body moved restlessly under his master, starved for affection." Leading the kind of life he has led, Kitaru would be severely starved for affection and Sess's domination and the overwhelming pressure of his personality and aura would be the only thing that could satisfy him. If Sess ever decided to ignore him or withdraw his attention and affection even for a very short time, poor Kitaru would be frantic and in a panic.
I hope you will explore the dynamics of their relationship more in the future; I love how they are both exactly what the other needs. Kitaru can give the kind of unconditional, blind, clinging affection that Sess needs.
One of the subtle great points of your writing: Sesshoumaru thinking of Kitaru as "his boy". That was just so perfect.
I can't wait to see what Sess's idea of a "proper" collar is. I hope you update soon!
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June 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, excellent chapter! I feel so bad for Kitaru, or rather did as it seems he's very comfortably in Sesshomaru's possession now :) I love how you've written Sesshomaru too; he's so cruel and calculating but it's all in helping Kitaru as well as pleasing himself; phenomenal job on characterizing him. I must say I love the kinks too, the chastity pouch and the knotting/plug are excellent additions and I'd love to see more! I must say though, while I look forward to the collar, I do hope Sesshomaru's definition of clothes is...different...than Kitaru's surely is :) Great work again, I can't wait to read more!
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May 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Gah! More please, more! I'm dying here! I'm normally not into OC, but this is great!
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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, very nice! I like the description in this one, and the little mental assignment of Sesshomaru's. Now I just can't wait to see if and when adorable little Kitaru will realize Sesshomaru is definitely not done with him, and what Sess is going to do to him for that matter :) Excellent work, I can't wait to read more.
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May 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
wow, just wow. omg that was so well dont i loved it. although i do hope he get clothing soon, he could get sick if undressed tooo much
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May 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't a boring chapter but maybe you could have interspersed the descriptions with some dialogue or action between the two . I like the idea of Sesshoumaru having a sex dungeon reached through a secret passage from his room; it somehow fits well with your characterisation of Sesshoumaru in this story.
I hope you update soon!
I hope you update soon!
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April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I love it. You have to update soon. Which is odd, considering I generally avoid fanfics that have OC's in them. But this one... I just love it. It's filled with all that fun angst and drama and juicy hotness. ;) Looking forward to the next chapter!
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February 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
O.O Oh my lemon! I'm only on chapter 2 and I have to review, I'm in love with this story!!!! You dear author are A-Fucking-Mazing!!!! It's perfect, so-bloddy-fucking perfect!! I don't usually cuss this much in a review but I'm just blown away by how perfect this fic is. Ah, I love it! *is doing a happy dance* Oh I can't wait to keep reading. You write Sess the way he is meant to be written and for that I will forever be your fan >^.^<
*is going back to reading* Review you again soon.
*is going back to reading* Review you again soon.