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by kiki1983

schedule October 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Only bad thing was that you switched Kagome's eye color from "Mine! Mine! Mine!" I hope you write more.
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just love this set you have and can't wait for the next installment! Sometimes it's a little hard to follow like going from chp 2 to chp 3, there's no transition. I couldn't figure out why he was in trouble until half through the story. Other than that, I love it. I've been laughing the whole time, cus it just cracks me up how horny they both are and are like "WHAT'S WROOONGGG WITH MEEEE!?!?" Lol, I lubs it. Keep up the good work!
*~*Evility*~*
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
another fun chapter. I am just loving this. It is my guilty pleasure. Can't wait to read more. I love reading poor Inuyasha's thoughts
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