rate_review Reviews

That chapter was great! I loved it!!!
I can't wait for the next one! Your story is so nice! There are so many emotions in your writing, ti's wonderful!

I read this in two days. All the chapters. And I loved it. So good.

Wonderful new chapter! I was expecting Inuyasha to come to and for there to be all the angst and craziness with trying to get him to calm down after realizing what he's done, but I don't mind waiting another chapter to see all that. I think what you did here, with Sesshoumaru taming the wild youkai in him, was brilliant! I love how he said 'you will submit, because you are already mine.' I also like that he spared Jaken's life. It does make sense, that where Jaken came from killing a slave wouldn't really be that big of a deal, and as he himself has now realized, he had vastly underestimated Inuyasha's true importance to Sesshoumaru. The tiger, on the other hand, knew precisely what he was doing and he got precisely what he deserved. Keep up the awesome work!

update soon

That was beautiful.

I really liked this chapter. I was afraid that you would make their relationship just about inu's love for sesshy and sesshy just enjoying owning him but not truly CARING about him. I think this showed how he would work to help inu be someone whole and well but still do it in his own way :-)

I have vigorously read your story, while neglecting my studies, so I WANT MORE!!!!!!! I am a very experienced writer but do not have the free time to write as you do. The only critique I have had, while reading all of your chapters, is that the "nobles" and finer demons should talk with a more sophisticated tone and language. This would emphasize their status, but using super-sophisticated language is not a common occurrence in FF. You use good enough language that it makes your story good, but it doesn't hit that "real" tone in some places. (I've had a few drinks since I've started your story so I cant elaborate on specifics well...lol) However, that being said, I am totally enticed by your style and the wonderful way you portray the Inu/Sesshy Sub/Dom relationship. I guess my ultimate critique is: while there are really minor flaws in dialogue execution (based on character) and understandable grammar mistakes ... YOUR STORY IS AMAZING!!!!! Your story writing/story making skills rival any famous writer. I wont explain why my qualifications make me able to say that :-) but I will say: keep your skill in the back of your head, it might make you famous.

So glad, you updated the story update soon please I love your story. ^^

This is absolutely amazing. I cannot express how much I am loving your storyline here. Full demon Inuyasha is so incredible too. Please update soon.

Hey there,

Thought you might like to know that chapters 13, 17, and 19 thru 22 were affected by the RTE upgrade.

Please check out the FAQ on how to fix it:

http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php/topic/20135-how-to-fix-the-glitches-that-are-due-to-the-rte/

Thanks!