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for Want To Be Your Slave

by LordYouko

schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have just started reading this story and i just have to say....young Inuyahsa in an over sized puppy basket is just pure awsomeness!!! the images it brings to mind are soooo cute!!!....i will not go back to reading the story [good jobs so far its really interesting! :)]
person Snowbell
schedule April 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oooh what will happen next??? update soon so we can find out! this story is one of my absolute favorites!!!!!!
schedule April 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new update! And what an update! Looks like things aren't going to be slowing down any time soon, not that I'm complaining. Really looking forward to seeing where you take the story from here. Keep up the awesome work!
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
And Naraku enters the plot!! I've been waiting for the character he will play in this story. Also, Sesshomaru should stop teasing poor little Inuyasha.
person jdbbrz27
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I finally got a chance to read this and it made me cry thank you for such a touching chapter. I was kind of glad that Jaken wasn't killed but the other one sure needed to be. I also loved how Sesshoumaru got Inuyasha to accept his protection and care as his alpha that was really written quite beautifully and you did a super good job on it. Now I can read the next chappie yea.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ILOVEITILOVEITILOVEIT!!!!!!!! totally amazing it drew me right in and i couldnt stop reading! i hope you post more soon!
person jdbbrz27
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
dum-de-dum-dum and evil Naraku makes an entry gotta admit this story just gets better and better. I loved that Sesshomaru was able to save his old friend. I also loved how he treated Inuyasha with respect and care and total tenderness something that little sweetheart needs and deserves. I also found it adorable that Sesshomaru's momma is getting a little bit of a soft spot for little Inuyasha who is testing her belief in that she perseves a hanyou is useless and should be destroyed but instead perhaps she is wrong in that belief which we all know she is. Also the fact that Sesshomaru has seen it in his momma and has basically called her on it. That whole part was written beautifully. Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
cool some action coming
person Arya
schedule April 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, for some reason I found sessh to be incredibly super cute. Just wanted to eat him all up. Can't wait to see what he does next with these fools. And the future confrontation between him and naraku....oh man I can just imagine sessh being his awesome self
Oh and inu was cute too.
person arya
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow. loved the last few chapters. inu showing a new side of himself was interesting, and i just knew that sess would love it! And as always sess was amazing. I really love how you portrait the character of sess in this story. He's very realistic and not ooc. can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter.