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Well I haven't read this specific chapter just yet and I have been enjoying the series, but in the begining of this chapter you said that lil Inuyasha is six... but in the start of chapter 1 (I went back and made sure) you said he's about 11... its much easier to accept the shota for 11 than 6. I'm only ignoring that its shota at all because its obviously fiction and plus they're 'demons' so human rules don't always apply. Plus I've worked hard on tryin to picture a preteen Inuyasha who's scrawny, weak, and dependent. If you could clear this up for me I would appreciate it. But in the mean time ill pretend that he's 11. Btw since I'm using my phone to read and review I'm too lazy to make an account I have an account on fanfiction (regular site(which is how I found this)) that I can receive a response thank you for your time, oh and other than the confusion I'm really enjoyin the story ^^

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~Ohioan

Yeah! Chapter! I liked thins one very much, I love when your Sesshomaru gets to all cocky and bad ass. Hope he really whips those soldiers into shape. It would be quite the funny little scene if Koga gave in to his urges to help little Inuyasha and just as he picked the boy up or something like that Sesshomaru shows up and gives him hell about it. Have I told you how much I like your koga? Koga is definitely not one of my fav characters but I love how well you work him into this story, if only the one from the show was more like yours. Well anyway cu-doze on another wonderful chapter, I look forward to your next update : )

Ooo, goodie goodie! I wasn't expecting another update so soon! Man, and after that messed up nightmare Inuyasha is still planning on leaving? I thought he had talked himself out of it for a minute there. Will Kouga end up figuring out what the problem is? He was there last month after all and so he should remember Inuyasha's human schedule. Surely Sesshoumaru hasn't forgotten. Hopefully even if Inuyasha does actually make a break for it he won't get very far. It's just horrible timing with all of this Naraku business...though of course that's what makes it such an awesome story! And here I'd thought this was just going to be about underage slave-boys when I'd first started reading it, LOL. Keep up the awesome work!

Ahahahaha! I couldn't stop laughing! The relationship between Tsukiko and Inu no Taisho is priceless. I have been waiting for this chapter for so long and I was soooooooo excited to be able to finally read it!!!! It did not disappoint. It's interesting the background behind Naraku in your story. It makes sense, though. Sad. Makes the reader feel kind of bad for him. And then there's Rin who's as bright as ever! Always loved her character, especially in conjunction with Sesshomaru. I loved her interaction with Inuyasha and her observation that he wasn't unhappy being "owned" by the prince. Ooooh, the new moon! I can't wait to see how Sesshomaru's going to react to what Inuyasha's going to do. Please, please, please, please, please update soon!! The suspense is KILLING me! Love your story, as always. Keep up the good work!!

Sesshoumaru is going to be so mad when Inuyasha goes out to hide his human form. The boy should be used to Sesshoumaru taking care of him and hopefully Sess will make certain Inuyasha is safely back in his arms.

Yay! I'm so glad you updated! You were going along at a fairly good clip and then suddenly nothing; I'd feared either something had happened to you or at the very least that you'd decided to ditch this story. I'm so glad to see I was wrong! I really liked this chapter, too. They don't all need to have sex scenes, after all. Though...I guess technically this chapter actually did have a sex scene, but somehow I just can't find myself feeling sorry for Naraku. After all, look at Inuyasha, who had until very recently been in a very similar situation. Of course we don't know what happened to Naraku during his adolescent years, how much more cruelty he had received when Inuyasha just got spared from that kind of life, and it is true that how you are raised and the environment you live in will shape you, but still that's no excuse for becoming evil. And yay for Rin! That was so cute! I loved all of that interaction. Then bum bum BUM...that cliffhanger of what Inuyasha plans on doing during the moonless night, coupled with the threat of what Naraku plans on doing during the moonless night. Oh the humanity! Oh wait, they're not human...hehehe. Anyway, wonderful job! Try not to take so long before updating again this time, okay? ;-)

Awww. This story so grate! =^.^= I love the dominant Sesshoumaru! But, why thay not "prepare" them in the sex parts? Inu such a girl?? Eeeh. But he is adorable ^^ But my favourite character is the Castle's Lady! =D Thx, I have a good time, when i read this ^^

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this is an awesome story! Inuyaha is so cute and seshomaru so hot! I absolutly love the relationship between sesho and his parents XD! Kouga is funny too when his ass is being kiscked by seshomaru-sama! i am a little sad jaken wasn't killed (I hate that imp) But if it means that he'll be torured even better (hint hint). beside that i am lovoing the story and the way you write! I cant wait till next chapter! ^^

I love your story! It's a wonderful mix of sweetness and action. Please keep writing it!

Ooooooooh!! I loved the last chapter. The ending's so foreboding. The relationship between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru is developing very nicely. Brilliant way to show how much the little hanyou trusts his Master with the rain and window scene. It's so funny how Naraku has Tsukiko's character all wrong, though, lol. Couldn't stop laughing about it! Her, make Sesshomaru weak? He's kidding, right? That's just awesome. I feel so sorry for Inuyasha, though. He's being targeted again. What is up with the bad guys and going after people who have already been through a lot, huh? They must have a sixth sense going on for finding people who have gone through the worst hardships and making their life miserable. Good thing Sesshomaru's there to protect little Inuyasha! And Inuyasha's youkai, can't forget that. He's slowly, but surely overcoming what was ingrained into him by the slavers. Sesshomaru's so good for him! Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Please update again soon! I have been on pins and needles all this time waiting for a new chapter and I'm gonna be on pins and needles again waiting for the next! I adore your story. Keep up the good work (: (: