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Oh damn, even I almost believed Naraku before I mentally smacked myself upside the head. Wonderful update! Holy shit, that evil bastard, making Inuyasha think he's the good guy! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Moar?! Please! I started reading this at like 5am and I'm liked....devasted there isn't more to read as of yet. I really like how you've incorporated the charaters and how you've allowed their personalites to mesh together over time. So, I can expect more soon, yes? :) please?

OMG. I live this fic!!!!!!!!!!! can"t wait to see what happens next

Hey i love your story it really is good :D

But just so you know when a royal speaks to someone of the same rank they dont use -sama but -dono so when sesshomaru talks to manten for example he would say manten-dono and not sama becauses it would implies that manten has a higher status.

*waiting for the next chapter* ^^

happy Belated Birthday! Thanks for updating!

Ah! Okay, one, happy birthday. Two, yes I did like this update! Three...did Naraku actually just brainwash him just then, or was it just Inuyasha being a naive, trusting child? He's not going to like be a zombie or anything when Sesshoumaru finds him, will he? Well...*tries to calm down*...I know that even if he is, Sesshoumaru should be able to snap him out of it. Inuyasha is connected to Sesshoumaru. Even supposing Naraku removed his collar, which you didn't mention one way or the other, it wasn't as if that had any sort of magic attached to it. Sesshoumaru doesn't need magic for Inuyasha to be loyal to him. Damn it, you! Now I'm on pins and needles all over again! Wonderful update; super looking forward to seeing what happens next.

First, happy belated birthday. Second NOOOOO INUYASHA HE IS NOT GOOD! I'm happy to see the update and hope for another soon. Puppy must be found and quick!

Man, I've missed so many chapters!!! I have been so deprived of this story this last month and a half while I was working two jobs! I love the updates! The introduction of Naraku was fantastic! I like how you're using the characters from the original anime and manga and integrating them like that into your story. Very creative. Inuyasha is as cute as ever, though I wish he would've just done what Sesshomaru told him to and stayed where he was. Now Naraku has him. And he thinks he's nice! How can he think that?!! Sesshomaru had better hurry up and go get him before Naraku brainwashes him into thinking Sesshomaru's the bad guy or some such nonsense. Who knows what that guy's planning. I'm so sorry I kinda dropped of the map for a while. I gotta find another job, though, but hopefully it'll be when I'm in better health and it won't make me so tired so I can keep reading you're epic story (: Thanks so much for the update! It was just what I needed. You can't believe how excited I was to find another chapter. And then, when I started reading it without thinking, I realized I had skipped some chapters!! I hadn't noticed that you had updated more than once since I haven't been on here forever! I nearly had a heart attack from excitement and way too much happiness when I saw I had more chapters to read!! *And* there was a sex scene between Sesshomaru and little Inuyasha. Damn, that's HOT! I love this pairing! Seriously.

Also, happy birthday!! It was probably yesterday since I'm up after midnight, but I hope your birthday is a fun one (was a fun one?)! You are the greatest!!! (: (:

I miss Sess. having alone time with his puppy. Of course the lemons are very much appreciated but I miss there moments of just being alone together too. The way you have them interact together is enthralling, I very much hope to see more of that in the next chapter. 'Pretty please' (bats eyes and pouts lip)

Not a bad story, I like the concept. Inuyasha is so cute here *pets* Please update soon.