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for Want To Be Your Slave

by LordYouko

schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sess is pissed! I love it. The yaoi was absolutely great, so well written and so in line with Sesshomaru. I can't wait to see what happens to Gaeten, and to Inuyasha? It would be neat to see Sess lay down some kind of punishment for him, if not actually pain some kind of pleasureable torment. In any case, great job with it, I can't wait to read more!
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha fogot to go the bathroom.
he will get blather infection or even rapture if he continue like this.
unless there was cum in his pee XD lol
person natasha
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow really great chappie i sooo can't wait to see what happens next time.
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and I can't wait to see what Sess does to that 'bad Kitty'...
person blueesky200
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is wonderful. I would like it better if Inuyasha was older in the story, but oh well, in my mind he is! Good concept and well-written. I can't wait to read more.
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The Inuyasha in this story is so utterly adorable! He is so cute, and I can just see him sleeping in his puppy basket (what a great idea, by the way) and being small enough to be picked up and put down with ease by Sesshomaru. He's such a harmless, sweet child, so I hope Sesshomaru knows how to treat him well - even if he is demanding, I hope he won't ever be cruel or harsh to the little fellow.
person Ivy
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Sesshomaru teaching the servants respect and inspiring fear was wonderfully written. Like the dynamic between him and Inuyasha... can't wait for the next chapter ;-)
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to know how Sesshomaru is going to "teach" Inuyasha that. XP
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was an absolutely evil place to leave the story...I was so into it that....that I can't wait for the next chapter to come. Great job with the way Sess took care of the slaves and I liked how his dad watched and was very impressed.
schedule June 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I must see how the scene continues. It is getting really hot. One thing that got me confused though was how Sesshoumaru was able to nip at InuYasha's neck. It is a minor point but it just bothered me. I thought the collar covered the whole of Inuysha's neck, so how can Sesshoumaru still have access to InuYasha's neck if it is covered? Other than that I am absolutely loving this fic. Sesshoumaru is such a badass and he is AWESOME that way. InuYasha is really adorable and I just want to hug him all the time. I can't wait for the next update.