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That is somehow so perfectly Sesshomaru, excellent job! I love the use of pleasure as a pain so to speak and that was a perfect example of it! Plus the state of undress, naked to fully clothed, was very hot. And the fact that he had to beg to Inu of all people made it simply amazing. Again, excellent work, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I like the innocent inuyasha you've chosen for this story. It is achingly sweet seeing him this way. I hope there will be more detail about the tiger demon's history with the prince, perhaps one with the tiger resisting his propositions of intimacy. Or a jealous inuyasha that notices this relationship between the two demons. Oh, can't wait for the next chapter.

I like the innocent inuyasha you've chosen for this story. It is achingly sweet seeing him this way. I hope there will be more detail about the tiger demon's history with the prince, perhaps one with the tiger resisting his propositions of intimacy. Or a jealous inuyasha that notices this relationship between the two demons. Oh, can't wait for the next chapter.

I liked your OC although I'm sure Sesshomaru's revenge will not be pretty. Look foward to the next chapter ;-)

Absolutely love your story. Keep up the good work.

Man, that was indeed a great way to start the day. Poor Inu no Taisho having to face the fact that his son is definitely not innocent behind closed chamber doors. LOL. Loved that part. The way InuYasha and Sesshoumaru are written on this chapter I seem to find a bit different from the previous one. Not that I don't find the domineering Sesshoumaru totally attractive, but I sort of got the vibe that he would be a bit more gentle with Inuyasha, especially on the first time, as compared to all previous lovers. The fact that he was touched by the hanyou just seemed to suggest that to me. Though, the scene was still very hot, regardless. And I just thought Inuyasha would be a bit more clueless about sex than even in this chapter. For some odd reason I pictured him not knowing anything at all. Not even rape. I do hope he has the opportunity in the future to learn things he was deprived of when he was a slave, like maybe reading or writing (just speculating that he didn't learn those--'stupid slaves are happy slaves'--NOT!!)Nonetheless, I am loving this story and I absolutely can't wait to see how Sesshoumaru punishes Gaeten for his insolence. YAY!!!

I noticed a few spelling and punctuation mistakes here and there, but nothing to make the story unreadable. Maybe once you have finished the whole story go back and correct the mistakes?

I don't usually go for OOC story's (or Yaoi for that matter) as I find some authors can take too much liberty with it. However, you have done yours in such a manner I can't help but enjoy it... and find it cute in a odd way. >.>

Please keep up the good work.

~FemaleTengu~

That Gaeten is a transparent one. What would he even be doing in Sesshomaru's bed chambers to begin with? Poor little Inu is all tears. I assume if Sessho is going on a trip, he would bring along his pet, but won't he have him looked at by a healer and maybe get some supplies to ease the way for the inevitable next time?

Sesshoumaru and Gaeten? Eww... He should only have the hots for our lovely, submissive InuYasha! :) He can torture Gaeten some other way than sex. Great job! I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.

Love the story so far!!!! I don't know if I'm being an idiot but during the lemon, after Inuyasha climaxed, Sesshoumaru was still going at it. Was Inuyasha feeling pain during that or was he too dazed to care? I don't know, maybe I read it wrong.....