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for Want To Be Your Slave

by LordYouko

person natasha
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
poor inu! thats so mean how they think but that's life i guess even know it happen at school and daycares. oh will but hopeful he'll get friends when he's older like sesshou said.
person Syrien
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG i am loooving this so far. Absolutely magnificent!!!! Its something i've never seen before. I adore the way you keep seshomaru so in character even while allowing him to shower inuyasha with 'kindness' lolz.
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, I hope there's a bit of Kouga/Sess action on little Inu! Good update!
person Hine
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next installment. Oo! Kouga should have his own slave! Miroku! Then Miroku and Inuyasha can be friends! Plus I love me some KougaMiroku <3
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well... I like her! Really well written and I love that Sesshy's mommy is just as ruthless as he is. ^^
person arya
schedule August 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! more more more is all a person can say. In further detail however i have to say that i liked sesshomaru's mother. most importantly i liked the fact that sesshomaru's opinion is very valued. and sess and inu was hot ;)
schedule August 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Motherly love? I love how you made the relationship between the family members. They are cold, but still loyal to each other. I hope Sesshomaru breaks Inuyasha out of his masochistic habit soon, it's kind of sad to read about Inuyasha thinking like that. T.T
schedule August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I. Love. This. Story. It's fantastic and so very believable. Sesshomaru's mother is perfect and the relationship they have is even more perfect. Inu no Taisho's character is rather hilarious as well. He is by title the supreme lord of the west but in reality he is ruled by his wife and son lol the dynamic there is great. And I absolutely love Sesshomaru :] normally him having a hanyou for a plaything would be shown in a darker light, with much more angst and rebellion. But you've cast it in a very adorable and intimate light. It's endearing that Sesshomaru cares so much for his cute little pet.

And of course, the sexy scenes are oh so very sexy :D Can't wait for the next installment!
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sesshoumaru has picked up some of his quirks from his father, but for the most part, he certainly takes after his mother! Great chapter, look forward to the next one!
person jdbbrz27
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First thank you for answering my review in fanfiction I really do appreciate it. Gotta tell you though if your friends think that a little makeup and long hair makes a guy look like a girl they really need to get out more and hopefully they will never mistake someone in real life fcr that or the said guy would probably clock them good. Now wow sesshoumaru's mom is real bitch and the Teru character was a real idiot thinking to not only go against Sesshoumaru but also his mom's orders whew that takes a real dope but it was a good chapter none the less. I cringe everytime I read of poor sweet little Inuyasha and the pain he's in but at least Sesshoumaru had a reason and wasn't just a sadistic sick bastard god I hate that. Can't wait to see where you take this next so thank you for sharing and I'll be waiting to see what happens next.