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Aww poor Inu, sessy i luv u but u a punk, u didn't go and try 2 c if Inu was any diff in this form, so much 4 caring 4 ur puppy. Great chp i cant wait 4 more. thanks 4 the update.

I was in tears by the time I was finished reading this. Sesshomaru should feel ashamed for thinking that Inu would have been different just because his appearance changed. He's still the same fragile pup, he's probably worse now. Since he's filled with doubts. Great chapter, till next time...

B reading U!

Why would we kill you for the ending? Because its a cliffhanger? That's ok, frustrating yes, cuz I REALLY wanna know what happens, but good because it seems that Sesshomaru really does care for Yasha even when he's human :D yey! I still love this story it's so cute, hehe it brings me endless enjoyment to read about Sesshy spoiling his cute little pet.

The one thing I've noticed both about this chapter and the last was that the grammar is falling short of my expectations. It's simple things, but very distracting. Things like missing words, or putting "A" instead of "He" or something like that. Maybe read the chapter out loud first so you are more apt to notice these little buggers, or get someone else to proofread it for you =]

Other than that I still adore this story and can't wait to see how Sesshy deals with his poor little hanyou pet. Hang in there Inuyasha!

The suspensssssseeeeeee!!! Ohhh, it hurts so good! 8D I actually really like the angst here. It's very well timed and fitting for some reason to me, and I'm the romantics of all romantics, queen of fluff, or so I'd like to think. Huh. *Shrugs* Either way, characterizations were spot on and I'm anxious to see what happens when Sess-sama realizes Hanyou Inuyasha and Human Inuyasha are one in the same?? >8D I'm very very excited for the next chappie! PS: Go Raia! *Fist pump*

LOVE the story. Keep with the good work.

I feel so bad for Inuyasha, I certainly hope he pulls through. Though hopefully this will wind up showing Sesshomaru that it is indeed the same Inuyasha in both forms. Sad, but very good as always. Great work!

Please, please, keep writing. The cliff hanger....I just want Inyasha to be all right, well more than all right, loved and taken care of and cuddled! Cuddled and cuddled. And well, actually, I feel a bit bad for Sesshomaru as well. He needs a bit of softness and it feels like if he walks away from Inyasha, he'll probably never get it. Well, if you haven't figured it out, you've really drawn me in. Please keep writing. ^_^

i loved it but i cried the whole chapter i just felt so bad for poor inuyasha...i need the next chapter please.

So Sesshomaru's plan to have Koga injure Hiten was purely for the purpose of making Manten upset and jealous? Or is there another dimension to that plan which I missed? And poor Inuyasha - he must feel terrible, knowing that he has been rejected by the master whom he had hoped would always be fond of him. What will it take to make Sesshomaru decide that his pet is his pet, no matter what he looks like or what form he takes? It isn't becoming of a future leader of his people to be so changeable in his feelings to someone he has been affectionate towards, purely because they suddenly look and smell different.

Aww, damn it Sesshy. Poor little Inu, I hope Sesshomaru comes to realize it's still his little pup,though a couple of good punishments for being human wouldn't be completely uncalled for. hehe

Great work as always, I must say the little scheme of Sesshomaru's was vicious, not to mention the thought of Hiten being dominated by Sess is a very nice one! Can't wait to read more!