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yes i think you should do a sequel i reread stories every few years and this is still one of my favorite i look forward to your sequel.

Just wanted to point out that chapter 13 is kinda hard to read, the entire thing is riddled with html codes that are intermingled with the text... The other instances that the codes appeared in-text throughout the story was easy to ignore since it wasn't anywhere and everywhere, but chapter 13 seriously needs a check up.

I only found this fanfic a few days ago, but I completely loved it!! I'm so sad it's finished :'( the story is brilliant in terms of emotion and understanding their relationships. I take my hat off to you :)

Loving this so far wow!!!! Speechless!

just wanted to say i love the book, honesty felt like i was there living it as i read, its not often i find a book that takes me to that frame of mind but yours did, hope to read more stories from you later on, have a great day blessed be :)

OH MY GAWD!!! SOOOO CUTE!!!

Yay!!!! Oh my gosh this story was amazing!!!!!!!! I was super surprised by the ending, I thought it would be a little more shameless smut, but it was so poignant and the writing was so well done. Reading through this whole story again it is easy to see how much your writing has improved and grown. This last chapter was a thing of beauty and had such a charming end.

I think a sequel would be incredible. I would love to see how Inuyasha's character evolves in your universe, and I could read a well written Sesshomaru all day ^_^ If you're inspired, by all means share more of this great story. Because the one thing I'm disappointed in is that it had to end ;P

Great job! I am a forever fan <3

Ah that was a good plot, a good battle and such an end for your story as we all like very much, us readers !
Thank you for your story ! and a sequel is always welcomed !!!
A french mother,
Merely Truth

I would love to see a sequel to this story! It's your universe and your vision, though personally for me I would love to see Inuyasha morph slightly towards a semblance of the Inuyasha we're more familiar with in such AU settings, although I totally agree with what you just said about how they would become glaringly OOC if all of a sudden Inuyasha wanted Sesshoumaru to treat him kindly and suddenly Sesshoumaru respected him as an equal. No, Inuyasha is definitely the slave boy in this universe and he definitely likes being the slave boy, and Sesshoumaru definitely likes treating Inuyasha like a sexual punching bag and I don't see that changing any time soon. There are some seeds you planted in this first go-round that I would like to see blossom, though, like perhaps exploring Inuyasha's youkai side and powers. He gets himself into another jam somehow or another and has to defend himself, perhaps? And then Sesshoumaru can 'remind' him how he will never be more powerful than his master. Whatever you decide to do I know I'll love it, just do me one small favor and please don't include the concept of Mpreg. That would totally ruin everything.

This is a great story. It really is, but it's kind of as if the Mona Lisa was made with Paint. If your formatting is fucked up, then fewer people are going to want to read it. If this story had slightly lesser writing quality I would have said "fuck it" four chapters ago. Please fix your formatting!