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for Want To Be Your Slave

by LordYouko

person arya
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapters. not to mention i think that sesshomaru's actions and feelings in the chapter was very realistic and believable. keep up the good work!
schedule September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Okay you are so brilliant and I really like this chapter because it is always nice to see Sess....have to rethink his ways.
person Chiaki D.
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAYYYYY!!!! <3333 Great update!! I like this Sess! He's brilliant! Like Sess's youkai, I'm curious if you'll be bringing in Inuyasha's demon, too. *Waggles eyebrows* The angst was there and good but it wasn't overly done as sometimes it can be. I look forward to how our young Lord will bring back that playful puppy he's grown to ... *whispers*... LOVE! ;D
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Much much much easier to read thank you for taking my review seriously :D I still love this story so much, Inu is adorable. And I like seeing Sess guilty and maybe feeling slightly miserable for what he's done to his pet. Hehe ohhhh I can't wait!!!!! I love where it's going too! Cute, adorable Inuyasha a demon? It's funny to think about and I have no idea how you'd be able to manage it, but I love the idea :D Eagerly awaiting your next update!
person Anon
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, Sessho is on the path to redeeming himself for rejecting Inu. Will Kouga have a thing or two to say to Sessho when he finds out what went down that night? It would definitely be interesting to see a demon Inu. Chances are Inu would still be subservient to Sessho since he is so powerful.

Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
person Chiaki D.
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Huh. My review from earlier was cut off after "YAYYY!" Suffice to say, that pretty much expresses my joy at the latest chapter. And I come back because I re-read the chapter and am wondering if we'll get to see a scene between the puppy Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's demon dog form? <8D The Little Puppy and the Big Puppy! That would be something, no? A girl can hope! ;D Anyways, loved the update. Can't wait for more, and I like the "Bad Boys" AU fic too! :D
person ThatOnePlace
schedule September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wahhhh my poor baby!! Sesshomaru you had better apologize or I will castrate you with a rusty screwdriver!!!
person Hana
schedule September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Thank you so very very much for writing this. I'm a huge fan of yaoi, shota and especially Inuyasha. Taking all those things and then add your amazing skills as a writer I simply can't ask for more. this story has me glued to screen with red cheeks and a bleeding nose. Please update the next chapter soon! I'm dying for the continuation.
~your new loyal fan
person kat
schedule September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it. Hope to read more.
schedule September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Why??????? You are so evil for that clifhanger....can't wait....really can't for the next chapter