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for Want To Be Your Slave

by LordYouko

schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I think I fell in love with Sesshoumaru all over again in the last chapter. He is just so badass! I can't wait to see whether he passes his test or not. I think he definitely will now after that last scene. YAY! Thanks for the update.
schedule January 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
....well I guess whatever it takes for him to pass the test. And I kind of feel bad for little Inuyasha when he gets teased like that. But oh, well, it leads to some fun smut.
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it! :)

update soon!

Cliff hanger

Happy New Year
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
THIS CHAPTER WAS BRILLIANT!!!!! And if this what was in your mind when you wrote it....all I can say is wow. I loved the training/testing of Sess and that they found out he had something to protect. I love this story so much thank you for writing it.
person dioeraclaire
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i love it1 i hope it lived up to your expectations : )
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
One of the best fight/training scenes I've seen written out in a fanfic. :) Very good job. Lovely way to end the chapter as well, even if I was hoping it wouldn't end. XD Can't wait to read the next chapter, I'm in love with this story.
person Reymond
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent, I found it magnificent.
They were beautiful to imagine.
Thank you !

Happy new year,
a french reader

Merely Truth
person susan
schedule December 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LOVED EVERYTHING IN THIS CHAPTER!!
THE FIGHTING SCENE IS JUST.... WOW!!!
and i went "awwwwww" at the part where he protected inuyasha!!!
person jdbbrz27
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was amazing and that you wrote it extremely well. It was like I could follow each of the moves in my own imagination I loved the lemon not crazy for the spanking I find them kind of well juvinile and silly but then I have never been into pain just to enjoy something especially sex I figure life is hard enough with it's own punishments. The fight I kind of understood I mean they live in a cruel rough world and Sesshomaru is going to be a leading ruler and it was at a time when diplomacy wasn't exactly the order of the day so if your going to lead you better be able to give and take extreme punishment. It's like giving a child a spanking or lecture you don't want to do it but if you love that child then either you will teach him or the world will end up destroying him piece by piece. I loved the ending a bit of a take on the movie and I loved it especially with Sesshomaru protecting sweet little Inuyasha now that was priceless and beautiful and you did an amazing job with it. I'll be waiting for more and thank you hope your holidays have and will be wonderful for you.
person Princess Sin
schedule December 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this was quite the chapter. it was heartpounding, heartstopping and downright
thrilling. that was some brutal training sesshy's parents put him through. i
can't wait to see what will happen. this story is great!