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for Want To Be Your Slave

by LordYouko

person Ramen Ktisune
schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have only made it a little bit in and I have to say OMG IT IS SOOO CUTE!!!!! I want to glomp you so tight!
person Anon
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg! No! Never! You have to update soon! You can't leave us hanging for another few months!
schedule January 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, Sesshomaru would never go for that...would he?
person varjo
schedule January 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hehehee, this Jaken must be mad if he thinks Sesh is going to leave little Inu behind... Thank you for the update.
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hahahah, jaken really really wants to die doesn't he? Giving that kind of ultimatum to sess, when sess is barely tolerating him?! hahahha, jaken has no clue about sess. he should just keep his creepy crush to himself, and above all be thankful that he's not dead yet!keep the up awesome work, this story really is one of my favorites.
person fluffyskittles
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Jaken. You're an idiot.
I feel bad for InuYasha. Poor little guy. Good thing he's got such an amazing master. ;)
person PandaGaara
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The audacity of him! He's just jealous! I hope Sesshomaru puts him in his place like he did those servants.REVENGE!!...or at least a lesson on where Jaken stands..(in the dirt that is lol)
person KEdakumi
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oooo.... Someone seems to be under the impression that Lord Fuzzy can be negotiated with...Jaken's gonna be squished like a little green bug, if he's not careful.
person Vyper
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Jaken just signed his death warrent. There is no way in hell that Sesshoumaru would give up Inuyasha to anyone. Still, I wonder when Sess's Mom and Dad are going to bring up the fact that Sesshoumaru is destined to produce an heir to the throne. I wonder if Inuyasha could be gifted in some way so that perhaps he could become mated to Sesshoumaru and have Sesshoumaru's offspring. Of course his parents probably would not approve, but a gifted Inu hanyou would be a good match for Sess.
schedule January 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well...obviously that idea isn't going to fly, LOL, although I am curious to see how Sesshoumaru reacts to Jaken's demand. Really good update! Oh, and by the by, "Hideyori" is actually a pretty cool name for the place. Depending on the Kanji, "hide" can mean either "excellent" or "esteem, excellence", and "yori" means "trust". A rather ironic name for a town where the leaders advance via assassination, LOL, but I like it!