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for Want To Be Your Slave

by LordYouko

person RamenKitsune
schedule February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE FOR ALL THAT IS GOOD IN THIS WORLD WRITE MORE!!!!! I love this story sooo much. I cry when I finish a chapter because that means I have to wait for the next chapter! I love this story. Your writing style is grand and I just love the plot. Thank you for ever posting it!
person Dragon1727
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I have been waiting for this update for a while and i can't wait for your next one. Always so exciting! Keep up the good work, you're a terrific author. :D
person anon
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
damn you cliffie! *cries a river* ;;orz

taunting/bullying inuyasha's not really a good plan *kicks jaken butt* >:U
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
How can you stop there? That was cruel! More soon please!
person Angeal
schedule February 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
please please upload the next chapter. it is getting amazing please upload it soon ^^ oh great story, you are a very talented writer.
person Amaya-Keya
schedule February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
omfg i love ALL of ur SessXInu stories and i beg of u to plz plz PLZ up date soon (and as offten as possible for u) i just love ur storie!
person Jetfire
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
ooh demon time! Yay, So glad its happening. Was about time too. Just wondernig didn't you say in one of the really early chapters that Inuyasha was supposed to be 11? Anyway thanks for the great story, can't wait for more.

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Aduial
schedule February 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hell ya inuyasha!!! show that jaken his place :)
person KatzeRaoul
schedule February 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Your story has been stolen on Fanfiction by LazyBones89. Just thought you should know if you don't already!
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I am so glad Inuyasha's getting a backbone, and that he's actually listening when Sesshoumaru tells him he's not worthless and that he does want him. For a second there, I was afraid Inuyasha truly was going to spiral back down into his usual depression of self-loathing, so I'm so glad to see that he's finally outgrowing that, thanks to Sesshoumaru's persistent claims to the contrary. I am slightly confused, however. You stated at the beginning of this chapter in an a/n that Inuyasha is six years old, apparently in answer to other people questioning his age, but in chapter one you said he was around eleven, though granted you said he was approximately the equivalent to eleven in human terms. So...is this a boo-boo on your end, or do you mean to say that he's actually aging faster, and so he is in reality only six but is about the appearance of an eleven-year-old? If that is the case, I'm perfectly fine with that. I actually do keep envisioning the cute little Inuyasha kid from that anime sequence, the "What's a hanyou?" question and him running from those demons, but I had always kept on trying to correct myself and realize that he's not supposed to be quite that little. So he is supposed to be that little? I mean, I'm fine with that, too...it's just a story, after all. But now I'm trying to figure out the logistics behind everything you've written so far, LOL! Well, I just checked out some blog topics on ask.com, and apparently (depending on each individual's development) it is possible for six year old boys to get hard and orgasm, so okay. I'm one of those weirdos where it has to make sense otherwise my brain screams at me how that couldn't really happen in real life. Never mind the fact that they are youkai and therefore we should be able to change the rules of biology to suite our needs, LOL. At any rate, keep up the great work! I'm a little worried now that that tiger has made a second appearance and he and Jaken have plotted, but I'm sure it'll all work out all right. Maybe nobody really will be there to save Inuyasha and he'll suddenly break through the barrier the slavers built between him and his youkai-self and he'll defend himself for once. That would be awesome!